MAKENG KNOW CENTZ
We need to get away from avenues-boose till we spew-life burned by the need for weed see the residue?
liven off food stamps till postage is due-it's not new a news-but we knew-only a few-will survive the other 84 of 85 will die the statistics speak true-
WE MUST ELIVATE
From the treacherous-drugs and slugs it’s scandalous-fiends for canibus- our suns-
Living in low income-wondering how come-they got a G.E.D when they graduated to totting guns-a 9 to 5 is packing some-If you want funds-
WE MUST ELIVATE
From the ghetto projects-being conscious yet unconsious in our sub conscious-NEW YORK air and welfare make us nautious-the problems colossis-
And I know doe is the object-but I draw the line- between 9 to 5 and serving 5 to 9 bing time-I already served life in hell and I just hit my prime-
And at this point- 5 yr olds cold hearted rolling joints- refore long they e rollen drive bye’s bullets with no name till somebody dies.
I feel like the object of redcule-YO RULE teach these fools how to use the mind as a literary tool-

HOOK_ WHAT ABOUTE ELIVIATION-NOT DEGRADATION-NO SEGRAGATION-JUST A FOUNDATION-FOR A NATION- THE CONTIMPLATION- IS THERE-
THOUGH FINANCIAL SITUATION-KEEP YOU ON WELFARE-
REBUILD THE HABITATION-LIFE IS THE KINGDOM HOW YOU LIVE IT IS YOUR LAIR-

RULE
anziety n ya script brains ya gun your holden an empty clip/
people sit for years trying to write something half lagit..brains a candle..let it be -lit-/
determination bein the key to any writers block think an reword before you spit/
transform your melody into something usefule ends up more accedemical/
write about situations u been thru come wit multies an punches create sum powerful/
Mysterious an unique sence of words on a pad that you put forth an created/
produce a story line for playaz something wit heat or heart show ink is a tool held by your imagination write something wit a sence of suspention/
spcritique a piece you feel you love it hances an increases the presentation/
prove your a determind an sick artist dont give up prove yah no imatation/
hulusionation not...juz the beggening of a new arra to elavation/
We're all starven artist thats make a meal to diggest our starvationecial feeling as you read over it reminds you of juz finishing ejaculation/ get off the cock/ CENTZ take em back to the block

HOOK_ WHAT ABOUTE ELIVIATION-NOT DEGRADATION-NO SEGRAGATION-JUST A FOUNDATION-FOR A NATION- THE CONTIMPLATION- IS THERE-
THOUGH FINANCIAL SITUATION-KEEP YOU ON WELFARE-
REBUILD THE HABITATION-LIFE IS THE KINGDOM HOW YOULIVE IT IS YOUR LAIR-

CENTZ
confuisous-said the world was clueless-
killen GODS children we living like JUDIS-
THE BLIND STAY BLIND I WRITE IT AS BRAIL-
been lived in hell-now im trying to post bail-
to the pearly gates-racism subjected to fait-in hate-makes me think heavens fake-
pray to building stair ways-home is a cave-we obide whos' law ?we don’t know so we still slaves-walking the trail of tears with Indian pioneers but now the soil is pave-the turmoil
WE MUST ELIVATE
Nothing is free-everything has a fee-except std’s AND h.i.v-
is it right-when the price-is your life-in strife-2 served you on your third strike-day light becomes night-you hungry to live but that don’t fill your appetite-
WE MUST ELIVATE
Form bloods and crips-spics with clips-hypocrits-whit-this life prewrit in script-
why would you want to be the shit-shit is feacies-im trying to be a higher species.ELIVATE

uppen on this callab right here...dont sleep wutcha all think...tight verses word~perfect...dont sleep people

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

This was tight as fuck..this had a whole bunch of ill lines....this had everything,metas,and mulis,thats the best thing in mostly all your open mics Perfect...and Rule,you was just flowin like a mothafuck in your verse...

I give this a 9.5/10...due to spelling....

Word~Perfect,you should have had your trade mark..yeah,you know, the all caps...lol..

Dope........some nice multis', flow, vocab (jus check some of the spellings), the concept was good as well.overall 9/10..good read

i cant spell for shit yo i dropped out of school in 8th grade plus i type without looking into the screen.proof reading takes to much effort so this is the best i can do ....
word to RULE the leadder of ORDO ABACHO prep up for a group collab in the near future.
thnk for responding it means alot

i cant spell either man im goin into grade 11 an still in grade 10 english lol but uppin this peice an thanks for the replies peace UPIIN more feedback

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

UPPIN

This was a nice collab...Both came nicely with flows the topic was real original...liked that.....Both cam wit nice multis....

Dope stuf

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Wordperfrct outshines y'all... i think that's the only problem...

i've read only half...................so far its fuqq'n tight...............nice ass shit..................i'll get back to ya when i'm dun.............

THNKS TWIN I AM GLAD YOU CATS IS FEELING THIS I PUT MY HEART TO EVERYTHING TO SEE WHAT YOU GUYS THINK SO WHEN I GET FEEDBACK LIKE THIS IT LETS ME KNOW THAT WHAT IM DOING ISNT JUST A DREAM BUT SOMETHING YALL CATS CEN ENJOY NOT JUST A DEAD POST.THANK YOU

yo nice drop i feelin everything especially the hook..real shit much respect to all