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ill post maybe sometime today, i just had a 12 hour flight into new jersey, and im kinda sick, and shit been happenin at my house, so i may post tonite, ight pz...


u spittin first tho...

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checkin in..... I'll spit here in a few minutes ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

I must have Danger written on me cuz you See-I'm-A-Threat/
You Dyin First is the only way you could Beat-Me-To-Death/
Like Pirrahna hungry for blood I quickly Eat-Through-Your-Flesh/
leave you with no skin like when newbies extend a Hand-To-A-Vet/
I came-to-collect, but leave you Broke so you Can't-Pay-Ya-Debts/
I hit you up like 81 Shanks-To-Tha-Neck, Gankin-Respect/
Treat you like Chokers you wear and straight Strangle-ya-Neck/
You need a Protractor to Factor all the Angles-I-Hit/
I can't stop popping your little pussy like it's Pringles-N-Shit/
You kiss so much ass in Jersey you Spittin-Hershey-For-Scripts/


out

good luck playa

o im sick to my stomach, here is a 15 Min keystyle for ya, sorry i didnt post earlier...

It's like Voters 'Read Quick' about Ya Verse How There's 'No Time to Enjoy It'
Cuz It's Like Your 'Necks' a 'Gear' The Way that I 'Shift' It!

Seriously... Your Frail 'Bar Structure' And Your 'Weak Vocab' Simply Don't Appease Me
It's a Wonder You Ain't Free, Every Line that you 'Kraft' Appears to come out 'Cheesy'

My Raps Will Leave You Delirious, If 'Atmosphere' is a 'Factor' Then You Gotta Question 'Where He Spits'
Me Beating You Is Like an Abused 'Menstrual Cycle,' I'm Beating You 'Period'

I Attack-Wack-Raps-Wit-an-Ax, 'Stealing Inhalers' is the Only Way You'll Make Anybody 'Gasp'
Cuz U Scared to Drop Bars like Death-Row Inmates, And Like Tarot Card Readings your 'Fate's a Laugh!'

You Gettin 'Chewed Wit Text,' and Like 'Noobs VS Vets' You Should've 'Avoided These Confrontations'
Get Used to 'Tear-Tastin,' I'll Have you Duckin' More 'Caps' than a 'High School Graduation'

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yo i would say mc81 got this:

flow: mc81
lyricz: spitacular
punches: tight but mc81
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peace out!

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uppin 4 votes,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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dont forgot to poll yo...

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yo i would say mc81 got this:

flow: mc81
lyricz: spitacular
punches: tight but mc81
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peace out!

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................

drop a link with your vote and i will hit it up!!!

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personally i think spitacular got this, no offense mc but your flow was way off at times, like at some parts you were so focused on making a punch that you simply disregarded the fact that it had no flow to it,
spitacular had a pretty solid verse, was consistent, had decent punches.
Punches-spit
Flow-spit
Wordplay-even
Structure-even, leaning a bit towards spit
Creativity-mc
multi's-spit
Favorite line-spit
You need a Protractor to Factor all the Angles-I-Hit/

^^nothing big but i liked this line
Poll vote=spit
no hate and props to both
good luck

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Spitacualr's verse had me gaspin' it was classy...The only reason i think mc81 took this is he responded well, most would be shook...
Spit's punches were mostly flow and multi's
battle-wise mc82 comes off harder

Vote = mc81

uppin 4 a vote here guys, post a link with your verse and i will hit it up................................................ ..............

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