ok usual votin rules
no d/r
no hata
or crew.

The subject is getting drunk....

Drop no more than 20 lines iight......go now, so will I.

ok. checking in... Odd topic I guess but im pretty good at topicals so I will try to pull this one off. good luck..............
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Alchohalic beverages have left my brain-in-shambles
People laugh and snicker as I stumble and insanely-ramble
Too drunk to walk and I Know i shouldnt drive a car with people-in-it
but i do anyways even tho ive consumed more then the legal-limit
swerving lane to lane untill I see a cop cars red-lights
He pulls us over and said "you know you could be dead-right"?
I laugh puke out the window so the cop puts me-in-cuffs
also puts me in some shackles so I can flee-and-stuff
I hear a can hear a canine barking from the back-of-his-car
My fear of dogs makes me freak out but i cant move cause shackles-are-hard
he calls for back up in order to get me hauled-to-the-station
alchohal impared my judgement so I started to brawl-so-he's-macin
my face to subdue me untill his fucking back-up-arrives
I cant even see now due to the mace attackin-my-eyes
finally get to the station and I start trying to bust-things
so they through my ass in the fucking drunk-tank
sat there all night on a little cement block till the next-day
this is nothing new tho, i will do it again when I get next-pay

yo yo check it!

Ive had enough, got a feeling in my guts, people going nuts, all around in this town,
Its time to sobre up
the sidewalks uneven,
No one would be happy about the way that im feeling,
all the people around unerved by my heaving.
Im glad theres other people makin the same mistake I did
they got the balls to stand up 4real and shout about it,
drunk as fuck 5 minites later re-seeing it.
mixture of shit and puke and pee in it.
Crippled on the floor head spinning cant move,
lying in a pool of my own bodily fluids.
4 pints at once I get the picture
save the cash 4 in one, energy drink to uplift ya.
extra large when in fights fuelled by the beer seller,
opposite end the night now im kinda mella.
Getting drunk on henney you gotta be fucking jokin,
I drink the harshest shit leavin me spluttering and choaking,
looking for the hunnies to hook up for a poking,
(and remember) you dont look at the mantle when giving the fire a stoaking.

There you go......good luck

yo eyes got this his vocab was bigger he had complexity to it and tons off multis both flowed well just eyes vocab and sense off humer got this

1-0 UPPPPPING for some MORE votes yall.
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hey sorry fo da free post but could yall vote on the mc thrilla vs yougbloodz battle thanx holla ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

yo uppin this good battle worth votin on................................................ .................................................. .....no d/r

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Right this very second i am upping this here battle for the sole purpose of getting more votes so that this lyrical dispute can get settled

Well here is a vote:

Eyes in my eyes took this. He had the better flow and the way way better vocab. The strucutre was really good to. I loved your verse.

Vote-Eyes

Please vote on this:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76670

that vote makes it two ta zero in my favor, upping for some more votes. thanks yall for taking the time to peep my battle, i will peep yours now aight

Eyesmind, i always liked his shit, and he didn't fail this time...The first bar, i knew he won, you can't contest the flow in the punh and the multi's linking lines together, it was advanced, complex and had good vocab....

XL had his moments but Eyesmind took it

Vote = EyesMindAssasin

Hit mine up, bein slept on, needs two votes, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=76734