when did towel heads become corner targets... less than 1/2 a man,
the reason for no walmarts in pakistan... red dot the sargeant...
aim is flawless... especially from a million miles away... listen,
US'll put targets over they heads... and then practice missin...
George isn't workin his job... and he's the father to who?
everywhere there is only bitch shit... it's endless... and the collars on you...
when the callers a blue streak... the capitol's then good,
The capitol's been hood... there's broken glass on the street...
inheirit the meek... the world shall... bring in the pain and,
sing in the reignin... the same fun you made is the boss you have right here...
remember geeks..?! and NERD is the only group out now,
makin a sound we all bow down to in religious prayer...
16 year olds glory spinnin on spreewell knockoffs as their mothers,
prey to the night they won't die... but no one tells this story...
the other side of opression... has me looking into a mirror glass,
simply as this is... the time for my recreation's obsession...


Home of the Brave?... Land of the free?...
Comin from a country that if could would tax us to breath...
Tax us to eat... Dont dispense funds to streets...
The rich run shit... the average man cant compete...
War in Iraq?... Fuck that... no weapons found... World is stressin..
What third world country will Bush destroy next to pad his re-election...
Who's the terrorist here? Yet the masses are blind to tyranny...
Letting the US impose their will... Ignoring culture and societies...
How am I free??? I'm not even safe within a school...
Add to that entartainment force feeding me whats cool...
So take a stand if you can... Question the values in which you bought...
For freedom we fought?... Then why does nobody have an original thought...
So fuck poularity... Maybe Dead Prez had it right...
Turn off the radio... Adjust so real shit is in your sights...
No fight... hypnotized by bright lights... Reality is fucked...
And its not just on the homefront... This whole world is corrupt...

woah, avalon sucked. = )
i liked chrit.

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Isnt that the type of reply you bitch about?...

Oh well...

it was a joke, hoe cake
i'll edit it later w/ an indepth response

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lol...

Word...

Delete my freeposts then...

You damned mod you

Mechanics through this whole piece were perfect...

i cant say that this is exactly original as it has 233 cousins buryed here in Open Mics.

both of your verses upped my previous interpretations of your intelligence levels...the way it was written made you seem a whole lot smarter..


overall it was a decent read but i would like to see you two work on something more original.


hoes.

This was decent... topic has been done to death... both came aight & it flowed pretty well... an overall average piece...........

NOLAVA & TIRHC

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Word...
Topic was played...
Just a quick key...

Thanks for the comments

This peice was dope, both of you were on point with flows, multi's, internals and good usage of words . the opener for both of your verses were great ways to start, for a quick key this was pretty dope, i know the topic is played but who gives a shit, if it comes from 2 dope members it changes the topic to there own way of writing it . . .

Im Out .

this subject has been done more than backheld freshmans....but
none the less......decent ........both of yall came pretty good......
but Av.....George is doing his job....don't hate... ......good job
to both......


7/10......

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ok... now i know how to do a collab
the 1st verse had a chopy flow to me, but good vocab
2ndverse was better in my opinon
sorry to say so little but this was Damn Near Perfect

vocab was top notch, mulits were on point but too few by my opinion

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81183

good piece...i liked the flow, and wordplay an the way everything was structed..pretty dope vocab aswell...good piece you 2..8/10

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The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Thanks for the comments...

Wait for a non0played drops coming soon

this was a nice drop...
Chrit and Avy took this shit and ran with it...
I liked the multies you both were playin and
the flow and structure was goody hell.
anyways... I enjoy readin Av's shit and of
course Chrit's got a mind of his own and a flow
that is unstoppable... nice shit from the both of ya.
A.T.