ok 10 lines
no d/r
no hata
no crew
VOTES
must spit today....

DONT COME INTO MY BITCHSLAPPED THREADS ACCEPTING
BATTLES THEN SETTING THEM UP WITH DIFFERENT RULES
BITCH..... IF YOU ACCEPT MY CALLOUT THEN SPIT<..... IF
NOT THEN GET A MOD TO CLOSE THIS BATTLE

WHAT A BITCH!!!!! OK I'LL SPIT 1ST

ok you've had like 50 mins to write 10 lines,,, just how illiterate ARE you?????????????????????????????????????

I DUNNO MAN CHECK IT

You calling me a herb cuz I wont spit 1st so im gonna weed you out and kill ya verse.

You just a fucking snitch, "Im gonna tell on you" you should of been a cop reppin the boys in blue.

COM unication you lacking patience getting angry when I suggest you spit the 1st installation, whatever happened to fairness for the nation probably wanna finish off the MODS masturbation.

D/R is what you shuda called yaself the only way you'd be phat is if you tightened ya belt,
Emotionless style that just cant be felt, you spitting so much cheese ya rhymes will melt.

Even if you repped the big apple you couldnt be hardcore,
and even if you were following the game you wouldnt know the score.

Cuz you a fucking snitch bitch you aint sick the only way you get votes is by riding dick cuz you loving the feeling of another mans prick ya styles behind the times you like tock without the tick.

You a baby in a jester kit you learned ya steez from school,
Thats why you so imature you still a young fool.

The opposite of cool, you spitting so much shit off balance ya fell off ya stool. (stool=shit)

Ok there it goes I dont care how this battle goes as com bitched so much which I think I got across in my lyrics.....you go 1st or im telling lol!!!!!

“Com Takes The Mic From The DJ After Horrible Booes From The Crowd Forced XL4REAL To Leave The Stage Early For Fears Of His Own Life……50 Cents “Backdown” Kicks In And The Crowd Quietens”

Your Ribcage Is Caving In, The Pressure… Will-You-Win?
You Can’t Eat For Being Nervous And I Won’t Stop Until I See-You-Thin
Or Hear-Your-Kin Crying, “Why’d You Have To Die-Like-This?”
Coz You Couldn’t ‘Be On’ Sum Hard Shit If I Let You ‘Ride’-My-Diss
I’m Pissed; You Exist To Cushion-Blows-From-My-Fist
I’ll Make Blood Rush Ya Nose Till It Flows-Over-Ya-Tits
So Change That 4 Into B Coz You Ain’t Never-Taking-COM ((xl B real))
Check The Battle Winning Rhyme… Coz You Ain’t Never-Making-One
Your-Fates-Begun, Lose To Com, Lose To Com, Lose-To-Us-All
Can’t Fight-Loose, I Tighten-The-Noose-And-Make-You-Fall

aight... X...
your structure is off...
Horrible flow in m eyes...
Rhyme scheme falls off...

Com came with much better flow...
Punches were weak from both...

COM takes it for being readable...

^^Pretty much the same thing^^

COM came much better, much more on target, and much harder.
Hated ya closer though...huh?

XL, I hear ya, I like stretchin the lines myself...
But, that was alot of filler and it really did fuck up ya flow some.

You came real personal, just not near hard enough.

Peace

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As I said I dont give A FUCK who wins or looses so vote it on up, I was trying becuase he was being a bitch so there was no point........

XL: I liked your shit here and you had some good multies. A lot of good wordplay and ok vocab. Overall pretty good.

COM: I have to give you the win on this shit just due to the flow and how on point you were with the delivery. It was a little close, but COM took this shit.

Good flow by both, though, good battle and I was feeling shit from both sides, but the unofficial vote goes to COM.

Laaate.

Weak punches from both
Better flow for COM
Wordplay is COM
Structure COM

Weak battle i know u both can do better

Vote:COM

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xl4real came pretty weak, flow was off and there were no personals. the big apple, hardcore line was tight, but other than that it was off the mark. COM wasnt exactly on fire but his spit flowed nice and punches were atleast average.
vote- COM