My name is True you know i'm strait pimpin
when i'm wit da hoes my dick ain't limpin
Crusin around in my shined up Cadillac
Fuck no No man i ain't tryin to be black
I'm a true pimp at heart it ain't no charade
Checkin the scene in my flossed out Escalade
any playa know that you need to train a ho
get it done right you don't need em to blow
all your money that is they can't waste time
every pimp rollin the streets collects every dime
you ya fuck wit my ladies or refuse to pay
you can bet your sorry ass it's not gonna be your day
cause i'm gonna beat ya til your half dead
the ground all round ya has turned to red
but dawg i ain't usein my lyrics to attack
hell why would i do that i just got back
my dawg krem told me to get back in the game
i can't believe i left i feel so ashamed
but no matter what i do and no matter where i go
you best believe that True's pimpin a ho

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it's not the best and i know i need work and my word play isn't the best but i want advise on what to do to elevate my shit

uppin for feedback

great stuff dawg
welcome back to RB
great flow man
peace

T4L

uppin

Lmao.........Watch Out Cash Money , there's a new Pimp on the block........lol , this piece was weak dawg , Let me tell u sumthin , on this forum , we dont rap about Pimpin and shit like dat , we dont rap bout caddillac and 22s.

My name is True you know i'm strait pimpin
when i'm wit da hoes my dick ain't limpin
Crusin around in my shined up Cadillac

^^^What da fuck is dat....This shit was whack , U rap commercial dawg............Overall: 5.5/10................Elevate , and DONT rap about Pimpin and shit

thanks for keepin it real wit me dawg
i know it wasn't real great but i need to get my groove back so i can post more and get better but man thanks for the info ....peace

uppin