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Old 09-04-03, 12:01 AM   #1
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some shit.........a must read!!!!!

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I'm back and better than ever, but wait.. I never left-/
So I'm just better than ever... but there's been no "ever" yet-/
so, fuck it, I'm just better, rippin raps that's h*ll a clever-/
and there's never, never ever been a better era yet-/
cuz I came to reign... call me a looming cumulus-/
I came to bring the pain to all the crews that's new to this-/
I WAS halfway insane till I mained the sane part of my brain-/
by eating lithium like candy canes, my God, this shit is ludicrous-/
I rip rhymes better than that nigga Juda Kiss-/
... or was it Jada Kiss? or Judas Priest? Shit, I need some sleep I'm feeling weak-/
and I think I'm on the brink of sinking in my own disease-/
but now I'm back and better... no, no, we already passed this shit-/
my head's spinning faster than an acrobatic chick in a back flip-/
I feel like a sadomassichist smashed on acid hits on a massive trip-/
where one half of me's tied up while the other cracks a whip-/
Wait! I'm a pacifist for Jesus sake of Lazurus!-/
What's wrong with me? I thought I mastered this rappin shit-/
Aaaaaaah! What's happenin? this wasn't supposed to go this way-/
well, so they told me anyway, but who is THEY I'm so dismayed-/
It's like my brain got packaged up, then shipped and sent away-/
wait, that's not what I meant to say, but what I meant was n/a anyway-/
so fuck it, let me swallow these pills down before I take this chaser-/
ummm... I guess I'll get back to rappin a little later..
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Old 09-04-03, 12:24 AM   #2
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LOL.. this was some funny shit
i was kinda confused but i guess that was the point
the idea was a unique one... rap about nothing but staying on topic
i thought u stayed just a notch 2 long on the 'back and better than ever' bit
'sides that it was good.. add a mulit here or there... sprinkle in a big word and u have yourself a good open mic

9/10

take that how you want
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Old 09-04-03, 12:00 PM   #3
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loved this shit, it was like eminem when he first came out.. ill as fck
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Old 09-04-03, 02:29 PM   #4
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This Shit Is TIght!! i like they way u mix all this shit
~1~
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Old 09-04-03, 03:11 PM   #5
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good lookin dowg.......................uppin!
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