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Old 09-18-03, 11:04 AM   #1
Patrick BateMEN
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You Livin Ignorant

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conspiracy theories, rarely concealed, people feelin eeire/
all we see is military fatigues and people buried beneath concrete/
picked up like Middle Eastern peeps, in foriegn agencies/
bomb speech, adorning flags flagrantly
raising babies to believe its amazing on our lands/
grazing diseased beef like a British farmers plans/
phatness to paychecks, i stay stressed/
plagued with sickness confirmed on paper like answers to a.i.d.s. tests/
heard of this mentally great place played on video tape decks/
to praise emotions of hatred of races to place bets (i hate them kats)/
to see which one will be the first to be disabled and the last to pay debts/
the same Beduans that named death upon them, under pressure like planes get/
stormin they beliefs for no apparent reason/
if Earth went to trial this verse is my short brief before the court proceedin/
we need real freedom, so abort these heathens/
demons decievin for personal reasons, like the weak one fallin for evil/
in fact they bought the cracks and abortion needles/
bombed Afghanis, Iraqis and Bosnian people/
the United Nations is a figment of your imagination/
if your skin pigment is why you think you different/
then you livin ignorant....
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Old 09-18-03, 11:25 AM   #2
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Really good drop. I like the end and how it flips it with the name. Damn good vocab, and good wordplay.

"under pressure like planes get" <- - - That's pimp.

Yeah, this was a good drop and I felt it. Keep spittin and I'll keep an eye out. I pictured this flow to the "NaS is like" beat and it went nicely. Good job.

If you get the chance, go and hit up "...Ever been so mad?"
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Old 09-18-03, 03:11 PM   #3
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"the United Nations is a figment of your imagination/
if your skin pigment is why you think you different/
then you livin ignorant...."

Nice shit, man, the end stood out for me man...
decent flow, nice vocab, feeling the topic...
This one is better than that other one...
See now I know it's Narcysist... (sorry if I spelled it wrong, lol!)
Keep doing your thing man...

Peace
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Old 09-18-03, 04:53 PM   #4
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yo im feelin this one man the line

"plagued with sickness confirmed on paper like answers to a.i.d.s. tests"

good wordplay man. thats hot. nice flow and i always got ears for conscious lyrics man. Peace
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