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I Spit LINES~TO~DEFINE New "DESIGNS~OF~CRIME" so when ya Bite it'll Give ya "MIND~SOME~TIME"//
Illunatic dont `DESERVE~TO~RHYME` i'll `CURVE~YA~SPINE` Frontward, tell ya to `Watch Ya Back` so you'll peep ya `Behind'//
Ya 'elevation's 'FEW-TILE'...cuz you just 'STICK~TA~FLOORS'..your a GENERIC~WHORE//
Im 'beritis spittin' leavin this 'PRICK~SORE', you couldnt 'close me' if you 'SPIT~DOORS'//(beritis is a form of arthritis)
Ya need HEAVY ELEVATION...Ta Up Ya Skillz To Get ya FLOW~TA~TIP~TOP//
InterJect ya" Brain Structure" Wit "Fabric softner" To Freshin ya Thoughts,N Still won't KNOW~SHIT~BOUT~HIP~HOP//**(fabric softener called bounce)
Ya PATHETIC~KID ..Like da "SMART BOXERS" I'm Accurate Wit HECTIC~HITS/
I'll "blow apart ya HART" like dropping NUKES on the 'capital of CONNECTICUT' ... //

that was a quick keystyle. let's see what ya got
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man hurry up over an hour and still no verse
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Yo
I'm Postin My Battle For My Hardcore Battle Against J.K.O
Then I'm Goin To Bed
I'll Post Tomorrow When I Get Home From School
Nice Verse Tho


*Dont Bitch, You Didn't Add A Time Limit*

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