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Old 08-26-03, 06:19 PM   #1
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Re-entering

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Quick keystyle here... been out for a while, I figure it's time to drop something... check it...

...Ain't it amazing how I'm blazing the seen,
and while I'm blazing your still chasing a dream,
you still rehearsing and just bursting out steam,
because it's hurting, that your thirsting for cream,
while I'v been gaining and retaining those things,
your just observing how I'm working all schemes,
always upgrading and sustaining my team...

I’m back, been gone, y’all probably don’t remember me,
My rap’s so strong, y’all proudly gon’ re-enter me,
Won’t brag that long, so pardon my identity,
That slaps this on, as part of my re-entering…
Stopped spitting out the words,
Yo too quickly that occurred,
Rap; I kicked it to the curve,
Style: I switched it but I swerved… out of my motion,
And my verse lost its conduction,
You concur this introduction?
Do y’all get it, I regret it,
Type of shit I can’t forget it…
Back again to spit my logic,
That’s like freshly lit narcotics,
For the thirsty hip-hop addicts,
Once my verse was tip-top product,
Now I work to hit that status…

I’ve been craving for this moment,
To be blazing and be zoning,
Hitting the stages like an omen,
Spitting rage that I’ve been holding…
Gathering saliva juices, to spit ruthless, man it’s useless,
Y’all can’t use this thing against me,
I’m abusing all that test me…
One rhyme after the other in perfect rhythm,
Is how I’ll serve and give’em,
To those that thirst and need’em…
And yo eventually, I’ll venture to what’s meant to be,
Take the adventure, even if it takes me centuries,
To get where I intend to be…

shit, I know that ain't all that... still, let me get some feedback y'all...
peace
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Old 08-26-03, 07:14 PM   #2
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nice for a keystyle
nice vocab, and flow
I liked almost every line
tight shit dawg
keep droppin
welcome back to RB
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Old 08-27-03, 10:21 AM   #3
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good looking out yo
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Old 08-27-03, 08:31 PM   #4
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hello... were y'all at?
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Old 09-05-03, 12:44 PM   #5
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ahhhh... come on, just one reply...
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Old 09-05-03, 01:00 PM   #6
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at least ya got one reply man, lol. Anyways this was good, very nice!
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Old 09-06-03, 12:52 PM   #7
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lol... thanx
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