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....Tears of Pain...Bash Ft. ThugzDoCry
IP: 50EA 9728
ThugzDoCry - Crime is life and Sentence is death
[ Verse One - ThugzDoCry ] Pain inside drives me mad,... tears of joy never had,.. and this aint a flow-to-fame// Cuz i fail to make it in this game, i dun care, i jus want them to go, the tears of pain..// Prayin to my god, I cant sleep,...Can u help me,..eery nightmares disturbin my mind// If U could would u do it?..or is there nuttin more than this u aint even real...and we all blind// Make up ur mind!,stay strugglin or fight back resist,cuz bad memorys will always be chasin// To the drama we really facin,..aint it amazin..some aint got shit, and some peeps are blazin// All the brother's who are takin to the next level, are they really better of than bein here?I wonder// Makes me stunder, over shit ...thats just wrong..it aint ok shit makes u the one whos gettin defeat// Money,Cash,cars,and clothes, jewelery,drugs,booze and ho's, u can say thats the life i wanna lead But somtime's that life is leadin u, u'r eyez are closed, u dont give a fukkin shit bout the things u do// Its not even fair whole life isnt fair u try to trust but fake snitches,surround u without u even knowin// Actin like they luv u and shit, im always bein down 4 u, but when its gettin real hard they aint showin// Seein brother's shot, infront off my face, ...Jus in a sec, a life is no more there, just erased// Some people say its easy,they full of shit but if u face the same shit i did,youll be amazed// [ Chorus - Bash and ThugzDoCry ] Bash - Tears Of Pain When I Cry Bash - Sometimes I feel like I'm Burning Inside ThugzDoCry - It really drives u insane ThugzDoCry - lord tell me why every night i'm facin these tears of pain Bash - My Soul is Filled with pain , deseases, tears and death ThugzDoCry - is there more to Life or is the negative shit we're all into , all that's Left ( 2 Times ) [ Verse Two - Bash ] Parking remembrance, darting from peasants revealing my art in a message to large for contention… The hardest invention when sparking the crevice of the mind to find the darkest of questions… Is my life designed for writing a song or trying so long to confine up the strong haters guided to talk… About each line that I chalk on papyrus, ya bosses igniting a bomb inside of my thoughts as I decided to walk… lighting support, defying contorts in the mind and the sort Ignoring the cries from the jaws supplied by the corpse on fire in morgues souls die in the scorch… The hype-ness gets gon when I sigh cuz my moms in the sky in a form I reside from in scorn… Trifle is torn and my life has been born to be crushed under ruble Life has it's own course and I’m driving it towards surprises like forks making lefts instead of proceeding to lead right…is that my fault? The Intensity stands my exceptional plans failed…so I’m prepared and ready to grab my destiny's hand… Dryness caresses my glands stressed my neck getting cramps, with eyes bulging out like the head of a crab when stepped on Chest has been cracked and my veins been intentionally jammed, clogged up…Yo god what’s happening fam?...............Damn........ Last edited by Bash : 08-31-03 at 08:11 PM. |
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U Didnt finished my last line :O, ....edit it......., im off now....peace...............
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Strong Opening Line: "Crime is life and Sentence is death"
I Liked That A Lot, Really Helped Set The Tone For The Piece In My Opinion, Thugz Flow Was A Little Hard To Get Into At First For Me, The Pauses In His Bars Were Off, But It was Nothing Too Bad, Nice Usage Of Internal Rhyming And He Gave Off An Emotional Take Pretty Nicely, Seemed Heartfelt As I Read It, The Hook Again Was Hard To Catch The Flow Of The First Time Round, The Style Seemed To Switch Drastically And It Threw Me, But I Re-Read And Caught It, Bash Dropping The Second Verse Was Dope, His Multi's Were Spot On, Flow Was There But He Seemed To Stretch The Lines Too Far, He Should Of Ended It At The Third Multi "art in a message" Then Carried On Into The Next Line, Flow Was There, I Dont Think I Found One Forced Multi In His Verse And Again, He Rounded The Piece Off Nicely Towards The End. Nice Collab, Made For A Good Read & Im Glad I Did Check This Now, Its Gay How People Like Us Get Slept On But The Wack " Lose Yourself Remixes" Get Like...4 Pages Long Of Kids Replies. * Sighs * Not Bad Anyways, Return The Favour: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8232#post748232 |
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yea i thought that shit was pretty good. that opening line kicked ass, the second verse couldnt have been better, the hook was a little confusing, but overall that shit was good.
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IP: 50EA 9728
Thanks..Still upping
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IP: FF40 570D
It was a little poetry,...rap....not hardcore hiphop, its more bout the concept for me, than the flow,wordplay and shit..., thnx 4 ur construtie feedback, James and the other cat thnx to....and uppin
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Yes...
Bash n TDC have always collab really well n this is no exception The topic was really tite...managed to get some real meaningful lines in there...Strucuture was lil different but again it flowed well Vocab blah blah blah..all included...good shit o N e |
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Yo liked this collab dawgs,felt tha topic and i know it had meaning and was personal,vocab was good and wordplay was there,good collabo dawgs.
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Eddy.
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thnx uppin
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....nice nice....
thugz...stay'd consistent with a good flow, bash....hit hard with some vocab. ^^^thats wat i like 2 see...in collabs..each other pickin each other up... great collab u 2.. peace
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Uppin..........
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Quote:
^^Werd, What He Said
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dat nigguh Bash murdered thugsdocry. cause no hatin but thugsdocry shit was garbage, try to keep it up, bash.
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