aight
10 lines max
no hate votin, d/r or any otha shit
spittin togetha, 20 mins after checkin in
no prewritten shit

gud luck

checkin in

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checkin in then.............................................. ..................................
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You Shouldn't have wished me luck, cos your the one thats got a need it.
You say you want these in 20minutes, jus so I can drop an you can read it
See you may can the greatest. But with only 1 loss my ass is simply better
Cos what I am droppin is so hot, you dont need to bring a sweater
Thinkin Im gonna prewrite this just cos Im another class
And then say ur shit aint prewrittin, you must be talkin out your ass.
But you couldnt flow quicky if your name was Andrew Thorpe.
So you can come out with one decent line, well bitch I got a whole army
You try and hit me with your punches, but none of them will harm me.

This kid couldnt elevate if he was climbin a ladder on an escalator
Fuckin clown, the only way you're getting up is wackin off like a masterbator
Prepare to get stomped by a vet, your best bet is to leave the internet
But don't get upset, cuz you still a rookie, I get your pants wet, like I dripping young pussy
Lyrically I'm rippin this kid's ass like I force fed him razorblades
the only thing explicit about his retaliation is the blood he shit today.
I'm like a cure for sarsh, some people call me a fucking miracle
I speak the truth man, not too many lyrics like mine; subliminal
Where's my competition, there's just none, after this last line, I'm done,
so you can go indulging in fucking animals cuz that's the only was you get sexed for fun

aight uppin fo votes I guess....

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Aight, Spit's verse was just wack, he attempted to use a few similies but most shit was just played or boring...Split-eyes came a lot stronger wit punches but every similie or meta u used was played, all of them....But split-eyes took this shit easy cuz of more punches....

^^ aight thx fo honest uppin

still uppinnnnnnnn

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ok
spit-
But you couldnt flow quicky if your name was Andrew Thorpe.

^^take that out of your verse. It flows with absolutely nothing.
Punches-split
Flow-Split
Wordplay-Split
Structure-Split
Vocab-Split
Creativity-tie
Vote=split
no hate just honesty

both yall need to elevate..spit had the only two lines that hit well which was his first two lines...iight starter..punches hit soft..disses were soso..no creativity..flow was ok but no heat..

split had some played lines..disses were kinda weak..no good wordplay..punches were bout the same...this shit is close cause no one really stood out...

but imma vote spit... just two make shit even...

for some reason i can't poll vote.............................................. .................................................. ........oh well

both need elevation although i cant say anything im not good at battlin but,spit,u really need to elevate your shit was wack,split eyez u had tha better punches,better structure,better vocab,all around better verse.

Vote:split-eyez

Icky Battle.....lol

Split Took THis Easily....

Spit Attempted at some shit....Such as Wordplay...Didnt work out...lol....
Need Elevation....one line didnt even rhyme....

VOte-Split

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