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Old 09-03-03, 07:46 PM   #1
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be yourself

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Sometimes you just dont know who you are/
a superstar, a bum, or are you bizarre/
you want to come back to yourself but you feel like you someone else in disguise/
you thought you sucked but than you miss yourself and that was what you realized/
howlin a beggin for the best comeback that no one has ever seen before/
you thought you have stunk for sure, but then poeple realized that it was you that they adore/
its nice to feel great just chillin and havin a drink/
right when you were on the brink you didnt stink/
you were what you have been in the past/
the future is gonna be good that will always last/
i will never be what i have made myself depressed for no reason/
its autumn and a whole new season/
kind of like a new self to mature into a real human being/
im expressing what im feeling so just dont get caught in your mind/
dont fall now after all that you have climbed and all of yourself you designed/
be pleased with your life cause you only got one/
you wont get it back once your done/
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Old 09-07-03, 11:41 PM   #2
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hey dat right/ you iight/ you gonna be my dogg tonight/ jus screwin......
cause im back/and you wack
my lyrics grab you by tha nut saack/
i cant belive you wrote that/ you should get pimp slapped/
thanks to you i snapped/
think it don try it/
when i beat you youll denie it/
try me/ you not my homie/
so don push me/
look its tha second verse it don get betta it only get worse/ you about as entertainin as fred derst/ ill take all your girls befo your eyez swirl/
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Old 09-07-03, 11:45 PM   #3
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alright rapking...this aint the cypha son..get your own thread...and yes...your "NEWB to RB" fits you right above ya avatar....

2h2h...this was aiight man...you kinda switched up wit flow...you should work on keepin one straight style...ya vocab was simple...simple rhymin..multi;s need some work....but just keep at it

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Old 09-07-03, 11:51 PM   #4
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i liked what you were saying in that drop, some positivity in this day and age is always good to read.

this line stuck out for me:

'im expressing what im feeling so just dont get caught in your mind/
dont fall now after all that you have climbed and all of yourself you designed/'

good rhymes, but the structure could be better, it just makes for a more consistent flow.
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