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Old 09-13-03, 04:25 AM   #1
Provoked Images
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From: Tha heart of tha devil
keystyle of tha thugs

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felt like anotha thug shit so hea we go...

Rock tha block wit a glock cocked and popped a cop/
can't stop, i shot clocks to stop tha tick tock/
a wrist-watch which means i shot my own hand/
maybe i'll shoot u in tha head since u already don't seem to understand/
i'll strut a crooked crip walk right down tha middle of ur street, G/
come afta me wit ur beef shit u say u got when my gun had finally become empty/
load in a new clip, put tha barrel to tha tip/
of ur dick and pulled tha trig, now u nuttin out a clit/
a transvesti that always will test me/
tryin to best me but fuckin wit a blessed G/
leaves u dressed for tha opposite of success G/
excess baggage of a fake Easy-E who called himself a MC/
will leave u open to be killed, ur family already gettin bills/
cause we left u on tha corner wit a stomach lead-filled/
since we stabbed u wit too many pencils/
skinned u like Hannibal, to make a mammal stencil/
official death of this wretched wannabe thug/
standin face to face wit me, toe to toe, our noses touch/
but u fall quick and u know betta then to get back up/
u got fucked ova on luck now all that's left is to cluck/

bitches holdin gats wishin to hold me back/
but even 18 guys puttin me in stitches couldn't hold me back/
imma attack ur sak wit a semi auto-mac/
give u black and blue-balls, can u handle that?/
tha fact of tha mat is the ter has disappeared/
ova ter, come hea, man fuck nelly, i'll kill him i swear/
if he ever come near, wit his country grammar/
slap him so he speaks jus a lil more clearer/
i commited a breakin and enterin on my own house/
cause i'm on lock down, but i stole my keys, now i'm locked out/
wat was that about? i don't know, y don't u tell me/
then i'll tell ya, we can all go back to nelly/
man fuck that, i ribbed his ass enough already/
too many things rhyme wit nelly...kelly, hell's key, as well as sell these thoughts to all who have ever felt me/
gone is my mind, went to tru thugs divine/
place in tha sky where i'll be damned sure to get mine/
i'll meet u there biggy, tupac, and 50 cent/
but flip it and i'll meet u there Eminem.../
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Old 09-13-03, 04:49 AM   #2
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pretty good had a eminem-ish flow to it......i ain't really down with that thug shit but it was coo. you had some multi's but most of them were played i did like that wristwatch line though. keep dropping but drop the thug shit that shit is wack i know you have more skill then that.
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Old 09-13-03, 04:52 AM   #3
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yo i hate thug but you puleld it off you ill with yours pop branch out to more topic twin hit me for a collab
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Old 09-14-03, 03:02 AM   #4
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that was pretty good shit, i was feelin the concept, vocab and wordplay. the flow was pretty good, and overall that shit was hella good. keep postin and youll elevate. ur doin fine though.
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