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Old 09-08-03, 09:21 PM   #1
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Post Mistaken Death( topical battle i had) check verse!

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yo.. yo... lemme tell u a story of a fucked up mind.. mistakes were
made that cost him his life.. just a lesson to always keep ur
cool.... check it.. yo..


overwelmed with this passoniate feelin of hell,now tryin to understand my morels..
each step came with pain that dwelled,who knows and who can tell??..
i start halusanate'n, figure'n a excuse for shakin,im bruised and beat'n..
not physially but these veiws are place'n thoughts of hell of news awaitin..
i keep my placement steady,walkin to the park and for anything im ready..
holdin my chest gaspin for air heavenly,thoughts of the day start upsetting me..
dont have no place to go, and fuck it how long have i been on this road..
the sky turns dark as i trip over a dark small object and feel to upload..
look down at my feet in amazment lookin at a 9 milameter as my breath increased..
and my lust for the gun made me pick up the heat,then i got up off my knees..
and i start to have death thoughts as if i was a machine,dirty and unclean..
it becomes reality, and as soon as u know it im wantin to kill somebody..
so i put out the clip,my mind insists that i put sum1s life upon the devils list..
now i controdict that upon sum1s life will i set upon a clip to leave unassisted..
walkin violently and then i noticed.. 3 men startin a fight smashin bottles of soda..
so i put out the weapon frozen and make the men colder,ppl screamin over each shoulder..
running for my life with blood on my boots,sirens as the police start to recruite..
hijack a car connectin each fuse,left the parkin lot in inflation as the cops persued..
got hit as each side,pulled me out the car as i was shot mistakenly not defined..
now i lay lookin at a dead body lifes homocide as i watch as my body is chalk outlined..................
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Old 09-08-03, 11:27 PM   #2
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Saw u had no replies so,yo descent simple vocab and multiez,wordplay lacked a lil but it flowed and was on topic,descent stuff.

Peace,yo hit mine up dawg.

Last edited by west : 09-08-03 at 11:31 PM.
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Old 09-09-03, 03:02 AM   #3
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I LIKED IT PERSONALLY DOESNT SEAM YOU PUT THE EFFORT BUT IT WAS GOOD
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Old 09-09-03, 12:53 PM   #4
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pretty good drop, had a good flow an was on point..good verse peep mine man 1
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