10 lines max
no d.r
no hata
no crew
VOTES
Must spit today
GO CHECK IN AND SPIT 1ST.....

chekin in...
I'm not spittin first...it was ur call-out.....
be quick about it too...
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xl4real...10lines....

yo chek dis kid-play from uk democracy-his shits str8 gay-
he's like a sound bite of marykate doin a remix off docta dre-
shit...stop the play!..dis kids played out like detriot at fenway-
shit i should be chained fo rape- the way i str8 fuk dis pussay-

literally u outta quit this rap gig-
look around u i dont see black pigs-

look out....!
yo his merkins contagoiuse-o' boy can i have 57 losses too?-
pathetic way u rep ya self is ceptic...Im jus waitin for BFI to pick up dis white trash i threw-
try an counter sue-
but a chance u blew-i rip on thru-wit a tendancy to continue till your blood turns blue-

lol.....thought u knew....

ok you thought id forgotten hugh? well im checkin the fuck in iight!!!!

Check This!

Lionello, hello? who the fuck is this fello, you couldnt hit me hard cuz ya soft like jello,
You spitting ya hardest personals but im still kinda mello.
Your spitting sticky shit cuz your stuck like dough and ya brain so empty, so whatta you know?.

Jack shit, thats it... you-got-no-hits, you trying to spit mad dick but you cant cuz you a bitch,
and you trying to play the game but your missing the pitch.
and if you turned insane you wouldnt have mad spits.

FINISHERS
I see your cracking up with weak lines in ya mind,
Your steez so old and fragile like arcialogical finds.
You couldnt be graphic if you designed ya rhymes,
Your a spastic going in circles using one arm at a time. (in a wheelchair)

YO UPPIN DIS SHIT DEN SON..........................KILLA BEE'Zzz ON THE SWARM.

Merked! Vote goes to XL4REAL. Stormed every catagory. No hate Lionello, your verse was alright for ya first battle. Sounds like you concentrated so hard on getting the shit to rhyme, you forgot what you were trying to say in the first place.
"Jack shit, thats it... you-got-no-hits, you trying to spit mad dick but you cant cuz you a bitch," ~ lol killer


Votes here please

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cheers for the vote dawg....................................
you need a crew man? go tryout in contagious or if you wanna crew battle then speak to us in the contagious forum in the crew battle section Ruttah is in charge......

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BREAKDOWN:

Flow:Lionello
Punchlines: Xl4Real
Wordplay: Xl4Real
Metas: Xl4Real
Multis: Neither
Enjoyable: Neither lol

Vote: Xl4Real

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Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

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Lemme Break This Down....

Punches-Xl
Flow-Tie
Wordplay-Xl (Barely Any)
Overall-Xl

This Was A Ok Battle N It Went Like This....Hit Dis Up Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79030

yo nice battle both of you
next time though Lionello try and make sure ur shit makes sense rather than concentrating on it rhymin
overall vote goes to XL4REAL
nice win
.......D