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Old 08-29-03, 09:41 PM   #1
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Just sittin writin off the top my head. Check it out let me know whatcha think............................................. ...............................



Lost in a nightmare trapped in a white chair it's there that I swear my life will never be spared
In a hair of moment everything freezes I own it but there's somethin that wont let me reach my hand to control it
Its useless to me if I cant have what I see It's senseless to dream It could ever happen to me
I eat and breath these emotions that I carry inside, But no one knows it, I don't show it my other side
I know this but I try to get myself to believe my world could change instantly, immediately, drastically, spurati~cally
But I don't think that it will, it hasn't changed for me yet, I'm sure that all u peeps will know me after I'm dead
All this stressin, depression, gettin me over congested, my discretion is my lesson for when I spit my aggressions
In the mic like the type of a psycho who might go and try to ignite someone's home when there home all alone and there's no one to phone
and there's no where to go cause your trapped in ur house that is going to explode
U know, I always dreamed that I would be someone famous, to let the children know without them I would never have made it
Give them some positive feedback in this country that lacks self esteem all these teens who allow all there dreams to bee seen
by themselves cause there's nowhere to lean
And who would care, that's why I'm here
To teach them all the fuckin ropes in hope my visions were shared




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Old 09-09-03, 01:19 AM   #2
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Uppin for some feedback.



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Old 09-09-03, 02:49 AM   #3
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DAMN THATS THREE I JUST READ AND THREE CONSECUTIVE HITS KEEP THIS GOING POP YOU MAD CONSISTENT
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Old 09-09-03, 03:15 PM   #4
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Thnx Word. U elevatin to dawg..............
Keep it real..................


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