Mistaken Death

you lead no life so when you take last breath -
all the true rhymers know its a mistaken death
fucked wit me- theres no mistakes you've left -
so when you die know its no mistaken death

herb, you bitch steal of camarac, the words you snitch
i know ya pissed- but wont have the guts to answer this!
rhymes aint cancerous- they like forgotten disease. .
you begged dont ban to feeble, even got on ya knees!
begotten of steez, you got none - rbs biggest herb
and how you expect brandon to believe this bigots word?
wuts this wigger heard? that his net rep counted for shit?
and then cried to his aim pals when i countered his spit!
founded his crit. & the faggot come suckin my dick. .
spit against newbs when it even wasnt his spit!
fuckin wit him & aint expectin explanations. .
just wonderin when ill be wreckin his face in!
and make it adjacent again wit the rest of ya body

no time to finish...

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you lead no life so when you take last breath -
all the true rhymers know its a mistaken death
fucked wit me- theres no mistakes you've left -
so when you die know its no mistaken death

wow. well, theres a lot of anger there.

your wordplay was kinda basic, and most of the punches were just lashing out instead of clowning him to death.
you had a cool flow, it didn't really fall off in any places.
I like the chorus.
your closing line in the verse didn't rhyme with anything...were you in that much of a rush?

this was a basic piece, with some okay disses. Up your wordplay and you'll have some dope shit dude.
Nothin quotable here though.

Peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

nice spit dawg...uppin for my buddy and plus i hate haze too........

^ha.