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A Deep Hatred Grew Through A Young Boy, Maybe Two
Of All That Were Deemed Unfit, Niggers And The Jews Gays And Vagabonds, None Were Seen As Important Neither Was Their Quarters, Within Days Were All Deported And Sent To Their Resting Place, Osterrich Or Bustkow Sun Up Till Sun Down, A Misery Of Hell That Cant Be Felt Now Surgery Deprived Of Anesthia, Screams As Doctors Seen How Much Pain Could Be Handled, Before Frail Hearts Gave Out The Name Now, A Shiver Through The Spine Of Time Never Witnessing So Much Death, Such Cold Blooded Genocide So Many Hearts Now Cry, For Souls Taken Far To Soon But Seen As An Idol Of Sorts...Skin Heads Will Bllom Soon The Klu Klan, Ignorant Folks For Power Of The White Man All Enthralled By One Man, And By All That It Wields In Its Hand Swinging The Axe Of Racism, A Disease Plagueing Clean Land Causing The World To Turn On it Axis, Begin To Turn On Friends But Now Adolf Hitler Lays In A Bunker, Surrounded By Angry Men Each One Armed With Guns, Wishing It Could Be Them To Be The One Who Puts This Bitter Life To Its Final End Bittersweet Is Defeat, A Dose Of His Own Medicine Slowly He Draws Himslef Full, Kill His Wife And Kids Kills The Guards With Him...There Shall Be No Witnesses He Flashes Back To His Life, Abusive Father, Mother A Whore About The Aching Pang Of Hunger, Even Soliders Cant Ignore He Breathes In Deep, Sheds A Tear, Got Up And Locked The Door The Whole World Stood Up And Cheered, But Hitler Hit The Floor |
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This is a great read- Fresh topic, Hard hitting imagery, good flow..
A Deep Hatred Grew Through A Young Boy, Maybe Two Of All That Were Deemed Unfit, Niggers And The Jews I really loved the opening lines, they kept me reading... even though the Using A Capital At The Start Of Every Word is kinda labourious to read. Swinging The Axe Of Racism, A Disease Plagueing Clean Land ^^ Perfect. The second stanza delivered the poem to the reader, serving vindication if you will. I believe all poems needs a strong closing, and this one had it - The Whole World Stood Up And Cheered, But Hitler Hit The Floor Really enjoyed this.. Thanks for the read ![]()
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