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Old 10-10-03, 09:27 PM   #1
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A Deep Hatred Grew Through A Young Boy, Maybe Two
Of All That Were Deemed Unfit, Niggers And The Jews
Gays And Vagabonds, None Were Seen As Important
Neither Was Their Quarters, Within Days Were All Deported
And Sent To Their Resting Place, Osterrich Or Bustkow
Sun Up Till Sun Down, A Misery Of Hell That Cant Be Felt Now
Surgery Deprived Of Anesthia, Screams As Doctors Seen How
Much Pain Could Be Handled, Before Frail Hearts Gave Out
The Name Now, A Shiver Through The Spine Of Time
Never Witnessing So Much Death, Such Cold Blooded Genocide
So Many Hearts Now Cry, For Souls Taken Far To Soon
But Seen As An Idol Of Sorts...Skin Heads Will Bllom Soon
The Klu Klan, Ignorant Folks For Power Of The White Man
All Enthralled By One Man, And By All That It Wields In Its Hand
Swinging The Axe Of Racism, A Disease Plagueing Clean Land
Causing The World To Turn On it Axis, Begin To Turn On Friends


But Now Adolf Hitler Lays In A Bunker, Surrounded By Angry Men
Each One Armed With Guns, Wishing It Could Be Them
To Be The One Who Puts This Bitter Life To Its Final End
Bittersweet Is Defeat, A Dose Of His Own Medicine
Slowly He Draws Himslef Full, Kill His Wife And Kids
Kills The Guards With Him...There Shall Be No Witnesses
He Flashes Back To His Life, Abusive Father, Mother A Whore
About The Aching Pang Of Hunger, Even Soliders Cant Ignore
He Breathes In Deep, Sheds A Tear, Got Up And Locked The Door
The Whole World Stood Up And Cheered, But Hitler Hit The Floor
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Old 10-11-03, 01:51 AM   #2
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This is a great read- Fresh topic, Hard hitting imagery, good flow..

A Deep Hatred Grew Through A Young Boy, Maybe Two
Of All That Were Deemed Unfit, Niggers And The Jews

I really loved the opening lines, they kept me reading... even though the Using A Capital At The Start Of Every Word is kinda labourious to read.

Swinging The Axe Of Racism, A Disease Plagueing Clean Land

^^ Perfect.

The second stanza delivered the poem to the reader, serving vindication if you will. I believe all poems needs a strong closing, and this one had it -

The Whole World Stood Up And Cheered, But Hitler Hit The Floor

Really enjoyed this.. Thanks for the read
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