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Old 09-05-03, 11:59 PM   #1
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I'm feeling so damn confused
does she like me? or am i just being used
had arm round her the night at the movie
and she made no attempt to move me
it was cold in the tent, so we "cuddled" for body heat
woke up next morning, and never even got a greet
If she just shy? or is something else wrong
damn i'm confused, wish i knew what was wrong

if you would just tell me, is it somethin bout me?
cuz if it is you gotta tell me, cuz i can't see
you said you kinda liked me, what's up wit that
either you or you don't, what u said is whack
hit me up with a straight answer, yes or no
i ain't gonna wait around forever you know


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that's all i got in me for toinight
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Old 09-06-03, 12:31 AM   #2
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I think this is so damn great because it is so damn relatable.

As much as I love the women, they can be confusing at times. It's kind of like out of no where a woman'll say "I'm not doing anything for you until you apologize for what you did. And if you don't know I'm not going to tell you!"

Confusing as fuck, I tell you what.

But... when a girl does give you that straight answer, then it's all worth it.

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Old 09-06-03, 02:59 AM   #3
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who understands women^ i don't think women even understand themselves.......krem while i still feel that you sometimes revert to "played" topics.............i gotta give it to you man you expressed something that most dudes go through..........when a female flirts and then in the next instant acts as if you don't exist................i liked the simplicity of the drop just because we all somehow turn into 5 yr. olds when a breezy disses us and we have those muddled confused thoughts................nice drop........1
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Old 09-06-03, 03:19 PM   #4
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no doubt

keep uppin
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Old 09-06-03, 05:54 PM   #5
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Krem, is there a special lady in your life that won't talk to you or ignores you??? HMMM??? Naw jus playin dawg, but seriously, all men do go through this, i had a few in my dayz, but in tha end, tha one thing that seems tru to most forms of reality, tha girl is waitin for U to make tha move, which in tha poem u did, now comes HER hard decision, ha ha, ur poem got me in my philosophy state of mine, nice drop....
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Old 09-07-03, 03:35 PM   #6
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Old 09-07-03, 04:11 PM   #7
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hmm..word...i feel you man...but you gotta step up n quit bein a bitch!....im bein real though...you gotta be real wit her...let her know what your status is...n if she still fishy...she aint tryin to fuck wit you no way...fuck that hoe....heh...pimpin is easy son...emotions arent...nah mean


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Old 09-07-03, 04:20 PM   #8
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haha no doubt
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Old 09-07-03, 07:16 PM   #9
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NICE PIECE....i can relate to this b/c i am in a situation exactly like this...good ish.....keep it up
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Old 09-08-03, 10:15 PM   #10
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Old 09-09-03, 02:07 PM   #11
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I feel the same way from time to time. Just gotta find the right fish in the sea. peace
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Old 09-10-03, 01:11 AM   #12
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thanks yall
everything worked out
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Old 09-14-03, 05:05 PM   #13
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Dunno what to say. It was simple. Yet strong. Quite personal but didn't go to within yourself. Sorry if these comments are a bit 'blah'...but can't think of much to say about it. It was a good piece though.

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