RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Textual Releases > Poetic Scriptures
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 09-11-03, 11:48 AM   #1
emde
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
Elevatin

IP: 3746 F53F

I HAVE GOT WHAT YOU ALL WANT
SO LAY ON BACK AND SPARK DA BLUNT
HONEY STYLE, TWISTED WITH A SMILE
EYES STAY RED LIKE THE SEA WHERE THE NILE
POURS OUT, LIKE MY GRAMMAR
IF RAP WAS A NAIL I GOT THE HAMMER
AND WHEN I HIT IT, I STRAIGHT SPIT IT
IN YOUR FACE I LAUGH, THEN I RIP IT
I WANNA SEE IF YA'LL CAN GET WIT IT

SO STEP ON UP
ELEVATE YOUR GAME
ELEVATE YOUR NAME
ALL YOU LITTLE BITCHES WHO JUST WANNA HATE
ITS TOO DAMN BAD YOU CAN'T ELEVATE

PEOPLE MAKE ME SICK
CAN'T GO ANYWHERE WITHOUT EM JOCKIN MY DICK
I DON'T GIVE A FUCK
I MIGHT BE IRISH BUT YOUR SHIT OUT OF LUCK
YOU CAN'T BE ME
LOOK IN A MIRROR YOU SEE THE WANNABE
NOW STEP AWAY AND STEP LIKE YOU WOULD
BE STEADY STEPPIN LIKE STEPPIN IN THE HOOD
NOW STEP WHILE YA SPIT AND SPIT THE SHIT GOOD
STEADY STEPPIN SPITTIN WORDS THAT IS A WEAPON
AND THE WEAPON IS THE VERSE THAT KEEPS ON STEPPIN


SO STEP ON UP
ELEVATE YOUR GAME
ELEVATE YOUR NAME
ALL YOU LITTLE BITCHES WHO JUST WANNA HATE
ITS TOO DAMN BAD YOU CAN'T ELEVATE

NOW I'M DONE AND I'VE HAD MY TIME
NOW IT'S YOUR TURN TO ELEVATE YOUR MIND
LET ME TURN AROUND AND LEAVE YOU WITH A SMILE
DJ SPIN THAT SHIT
NOW ELEVATE FREESTYLE


SECOND POST.... I WAS TOLD TO ELEVATE....DID THAT DO THE TRICK?
  Reply With Quote
Old 09-14-03, 05:18 AM   #2
~Soultress~
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 73D8 AACD

Iunno, I'm not really a fan of this type of expression
I mean it's good work, don't get me wrong....
I just prefer the kind with more depth, which i didn't
think you had...this came across more of a flow then
a poem..
But it was still good
stay up
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:24 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.