With just one kiss you can tell a lot. That kiss is the beginning of something good and or bad. In the direction of good it comes for me. That first kiss felt like it lasted a life time. Felt like it wasn't the first time i kissed her...... Maybe in my past life we were once together. Holding her to me...... looking into her eyes..........our faces came closer and then it happened. So slow and passionatly....at that moment our bodies became one...drifted to a dream land in our minds. That feeling when our lips came in synk was greater than anything else before. A kiss that you never want to break.....a hug you never want to let go.... The happiness flowed though my body and into hers also.Our minds drifted off into a dream world. Free of worries, pain, and sorrow. All we felt is the love for eachother. A feeling that i've been lacking for quite some time now. That kiss was more than great, that kiss made me fall in love again..... Just not softly but hard. I want something to happen between us and so does she........such beauty, eyes glicening like the stars on a clear night......... such a princess deserves the best and i will make her dreams become reality....A new beginning for us both.We fell deep in love with eachother........ And from what?

just one kiss...................

this is a poem that reads like a speech but sounds like a scripture, and u pulled it off wit hardly a flaw, if it wasn't for that fact, u may not have pulled it off so easily, tha end, "just one kiss" was nice, but i would've went ahead and spaced it onto another line for a more dramaic feel to it...good piece, keep dropin...

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iight

AngellicalR was right you were lucky with this piece, it could have destroyed the whole piece with one flaw

it was happy up beat piece, ( not to many of those around ) but im starting to see more and more of them, which is good, cause even thou life does deal out some hard shit, it does give us wonderful happy things also, like true love

i felt you lacked in vocab, it was pretty plain, but the topic was put in a new view. your picture coudl have gone into more depth i thought, but it was still a good piece

thou i have to say once again i agree with AngellicalR, you should have kept the piece going form here, woulda been nice

my love

~Tera~
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lol................man this takes me back.............hard to put into words such a unique and life changing feeling.............i like the approach and format too...........felt like you were talking to me.......deep and romantic at the same time............it is not easy to write a free word type piece so my respect in that regard.....i would like to see you expand on this particular thought a little more imagery would have helped but maybe this is a build up to something greater.......congratulations to you on your journey into love and good luck as well trust me you'll need it........lol.......1

good shit.no1 can deny that they experience the feeling that you describe when the meet that special some1 and share that special moment together.keep em coming.

thanks, when i came i though this is most rap but since they have poetry i express myself better. i have plenty more to write and always from the heart