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Old 09-10-03, 02:57 PM   #1
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FEEL DA PRESENCE! new Track!!

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I just need some feedback on dis one...i produced tha beat its mad hot.

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Old 09-10-03, 11:41 PM   #2
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^^ne1?
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Old 09-11-03, 05:53 PM   #3
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track is pretty dope. i think it'd be better if u raised the string hit to the next note every few bars....but no the less this is hot shit.
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Old 09-11-03, 06:17 PM   #4
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Hot track, you guy's did a hell of a job on this production. I want to cop if you ever drop a cd. Hit me up maybe you guy's already have something together. Hot track, good luck to you, very talented. Keep bringing that heat..

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Old 09-11-03, 10:12 PM   #5
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thx for the feedback dawgs, production started to get better when i borrowed a shurebeta 57a microphone and a mic stand from my boy!
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Old 09-13-03, 08:34 PM   #6
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1 more? 3 gives me a good idea
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Old 09-13-03, 08:50 PM   #7
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shits nice. beats very nice. lyrics is coo. your voice is interesting. quality is nice. the echo could have bene cut out. or maybe thats your double up i dont know. but still nice. keep em comin.

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Old 09-14-03, 05:14 PM   #8
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theres overdubs..maybe there a little loud, and also a simple delay.
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