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Old 09-13-03, 09:08 PM   #1
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fuck da bullshit

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fuck da bullshit on this site, like dick ryders and pre-writes,
if an emcee bites be watchful, cuz he'll try to get away with it and sumbody gotta stop'um, drop'um, mock'um off tha rap battles hood like it was aim-just block'um, ignore a bitch like pruple haze,
cuz he's a verbal gay out to ride ya dick today, he's applied to evict dis-may, and make ery one happy so he leavin this place, but if that u beleivin then u gotta true face, anyone who says he's got blew he tastes, all there dicks they cant keep up wit his pace, this mutha fuckin homo fuckin erybody from tricks to plays, cuz ya lines is so sctripted u in a pre-writing daze, next thing u'll see is Me Fighting Haze..........

i unno jus bored
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Old 09-13-03, 09:23 PM   #2
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was aite, i liked that first line, work on ya structure.
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Old 09-13-03, 09:36 PM   #3
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meks no beef or nutin but i thought u got slipped,

anyway your verse was ok but not great and ive seen u do a lot better,

cuz he's a verbal gay out to ride ya dick today, he's applied to evict dis-may, and make ery one happy so he leavin this place, but if that u beleivin then u gotta true face, anyone who says he's got blew he tastes

^^^^ best bit can u drop a reply on my collab with krem
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Old 09-13-03, 11:21 PM   #4
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tru, thanx.......uppin
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Old 09-13-03, 11:39 PM   #5
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that was a tight flow nigga but yo structure was a little suspect. still nice flow nigga
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Old 09-14-03, 01:02 AM   #6
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i thought the peice was aight, the structure needs a little work, but the vocab was ok, the wordplay was pretty good, and the content was good. ive seen better, but the post was ok.
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