I have your words saved but you will get 'no' replies
unless you reply to other people in this forum..read
the rules..its not hard...youll get your rhymes back..
I just copied and pasted it..I do my own music so
dont think ima biter....reply to people and ill repost

thank you for your time and attention

aight, this poem needs some help, i understand it and wat not, but i got more of a speech feelin to it, not so much of a poem, tha rhyme scheme was also a lil too much emphasized, jus try to take more time to think about wat u r writin...thank you...

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iight

i hear the message i see its purpose but thats bout it

not much to it, doesnt look like much effort went into it, draw me a picture, make me feel it inside me, make it start ideas in my head that leave me thinking about the idea all day ( or at least for a few minutes ) there just wasnt anything to it.

put some more emotion into the next, and more time, think about things and make them longer, theres not many poems that are that short that make it to be great pieces of work, but it has been done thou.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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Yeah, what you saying was there. But nothing else. It was...

..well, nothing other than what it was..(!?!)...

Still, the meaning was appreciated to an extent.

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