They say the key to life is what we destroy we rebuild……you know so I guess that’s yeah thats
why I study every book in the shelf for myself.

We destroyed BABEL-condemned ourselves rebuild hell as it fell-
now I preach what I teach to reach god with brain cells.
Life is to short for me to live with regret-we have to watch a terrorist threat.
but a threat happens before the event-if that the case they wouldn’t of dropped they bombs yet.
But BIN LADDIN been happened how many dead?
plus NEW YORK still holds its battle scar from where we bled.
what more?
We mold who we are literally and biblically this is the HOLY WAR.
Which is one In a chain im amazed-we haven’t seen that chain is a trap we trapped look around we slaves-
So when I think of the 911 BOMB ,I catch a BLAST FROM THE PAST-
Rememeber The last shall be first and the first shall be last.
we depending on their surrendering, Rendering us hope~less-
ready to fight none the less-
for what we have,,, then sacrifice it. in the end if we win-
the prize will be nothing left-but to repeant for our sins.
in between this, satan and god are the ref-while man battles man to our eventual consentual death.
We allowed hell to surfice on the planet- blame it with our GODAMN ITS.
Well if you wish it, now its’ granted.
Its in our nature to kill-but peep how it gets twice as ill-
kill don’t mean a physical end to life-it can be more trife.
hope can die, love can die, dreams cant survive, if they denied,
man cant breath without air supplied, truth wont exsist in the side of a lie,
and tears wont prove your still alive inside unless you cry.
So how can I stand for fallen soldiers but not for fallen angels?
the world is twisted no wonder it orbits in slanted angles.
Tangled in the orbit-mangled brains till we damn… near…. forfeit.
To the culprit-we elected-to have us represented.
Now that it gets pooshy-
We might as well chose ms.Clinton the new presidents a pussy.
I love this country it’s the home of the free- to bad living there isn’t.
And I try to be optimistic- but life is target practice you either have a goal and aim or you miss it.
Its happening right now bight here-bath in the acid rain of gods tainted tears.
He sacrifised hiw son so we would sacrifice ourselves in under 2,003 years.

Yo man that was deep. I had to read that twice. I liked the line -I love this country it?s the home of the free- to bad living there isn?t. And I try to be optimistic- but life is target practice you either have a goal and aim or you miss it. I was feeling that line the most. You got my mind open with that one. Keep it up.

yes...this was deep...I liked the line where you said "we might as well chose ms.Clinton the new president's a pussy"...that shit is so true...lol...but I liked the vocab and the deepness of emotion you expressed within' this piece...hot shit...keep doin' ya thing fam...rep rep on...Omenz por vida!!!!!!

NO DOUBT PAPA OMENS ES POR SIEMPRE

^^^verdad...Word...mi chorizo es despaciado grande...(no I'm not gay...that was for the ladiez lol)

LOL PUES ME REPRISENTAR OMEN ASTA EL FIN PERO MI CHORIZO ES MAS GRANDE QUE TUYO!!!!!!!!!

^^^no...mi chorizo es mas grande...mira...*pulls down pants*...
lol...j/k

ha dooope piece dawg. wordplay and vocab not to mention emotion. it started like a political piece but the emotion in it made it more of a vent. very dope man i'm feeling you. the flow was a little off to me what beat did you write this too? anyway good drop keep'um coming. 1

check out my piece if you get a chance

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79942

I WILL POP AND THE BEAT WAS RASS KASS ORDO ABACHO

you like me you really like me****weeps**** runs back to his room and take all your names of his people to kill list....
thanks for the critiques to all of you

^^^crazy Spic...lol

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