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09-15-03, 07:03 AM | #1 | ||||||
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i puff the weed and smoke the blunt
but in this life i only get what i need and not what i want tired of having to exept 2nd best feels like im going to explode get rid of this load constantly on my chest suicide bomber reduce everybode 2 roadkill in the road new money on fake motherfuckers so easy 2 see they have the money butt still wish they was me try to immitate learn the flow & styles of a g but thats something they dont get, it comes from within its under your skin your born with the instinct 2 win for 2 years i've been wearing the same shoes the same cap everyday i have to slave everynight 2 earn money 4 food 4 the next day it aint easy but it could have been worse everyday i walk and think by myself 2 snath that fake bitch's purse i feel like im livng under a curse i hope it gets better no t get worse |
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09-16-03, 12:20 AM | #2 | ||||||
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all lyrics are poetry....all lyrics are poetry.........all lyrics are poetry..........all.......fuck it..........WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO SAY....your message got lost in your attempt to be 2pac.....look be yourself its a little scary at first but try.............even though i am a firm believer in the fact that all lyrics are poetry........when writing POETRY maybe you should try to express yourself a little more clearly...............i didn't feel that making this piece a flat unemotional read..........try readind some pieces from soultress, content, varentao, and necromancer............see how they are original? then take their lead and be yourself...............1
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09-16-03, 12:24 AM | #3 | |||||||
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This was a cool piece the flow was kinda off but you did well anyway keep at it mang 1..
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