Observe-tha-switch and my nervous-twitch, prefer-my-bitch over nerds-and-tricks//
leakin-my-language and speakin-through-anguish, streakin-through-changes believin-my-name-is//
something different due to amnesia, seizures induced through procedures//
shoot outs where bullets-cross-blocks, where else can u find hoes that pull-n-toss-cocks//
release my piece and its chamber,anger puts many enemys in danger//
rearrange-tha way you proceed,that way you suceed and u overcome your greed//
still cant plead for u to rethink your decision, so get this incision of my invision, like light spreadin through prisms//
blendin colors, listenin to long-winded-mothers, gripe about our sinnin-lovers, fuck so much since ive been-in-rubbers//
elastic-stretchin, destroyin these bastards-second, so i ask-tha-question,whos the last-one-wreckin.

^^^it was ok 6/10... there were lots of multi's but it was VERY short and lacked any real depth... i like all the multis tho... flows very nicely, it more like a quick keystle... keep it up tho

I was feeling it... as usual, shit had mad rhythm, I was loving that flow... good rhymes scheme and wordplya... concept was cool... true it didn't have much depth, but shit to me showed skill... no doubt...
Bad thing was though... it was kinda short.... thas all...

oh yo, like I said, I'm feeling your style man... it's a bit similar to mine... so I want to know if you could give me some feedback on this... your honest opinion... lol...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7712#post747712
Usually I would never do that... but as you will see, almost no one said nothing... and I thought I posted a decent drop...
thanx

Peace

this shit was tight. i like the mutli's u had and the flow was sick the first few bars had me goin. it was a little short but heads gotta post sumthin short once in a while cuz people r puttin enough lyrics 4 2 songs on 1 post which is a pain 2 read. keep doin the damn thing