Ummmmm Keystyle?

When Theres No One Left By YourSide, Whos To Care?
I Just Sit And Stare, Its Like People Always Say, Lifes Unfair
Its Like Truth Or Dare, You Have To Make The Smart Move
But Stay Smooth, One Wrong Turn, And You Will Lose
But Whats New? People Are Humans, Which Equals Mistakes
Nobody Is Fake, Just Believe In Others, And Success Is Made
Memories Might Fade, But Keep The True Ones In Mind
Cuz Even If You Were Blind, True Friendship, You Can Find
Just Take Your Time, Good Things Are Always Bound To Happen
Find Your True Passion, In The End, Others Will Be Clappin
Just Imagine, All The Success You Can Reach With Just Dreams
Not Everythings Is What It Seems, Respect, We Could Be A Team
Its Like A Movie Scence, Tryin To Make It All Realistic But Its Not
Not Matter How Hard We Tried, We Fought, Emotions Never Caught
But Respect Will Be Taught, Becuz This Is What We Are Based On
Dont Want THe GOod Days To Be Gone, Life Seems Too Long
But Its Just As Fast As This Song, Earth, Is Where We Belong....

Pretty cool...

Simple, yet pretty deep.

Not telling me anything I already know, but I liked your delivery and I liked that it was short and to the point.

Could used a bit more metas...

Wasn't able to comparably feel you to anything...

But, maybe I wasn't suppossed to.

Peace

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^^ i just wrote it cuz i was bored....lol

but thanks for hte reply

'tis was aight. Even for a keystyle. I keystyle everything I write.

Simple throughout the whole thing. Where you shined though, was the in the flow. The flow was good and consistent throughout the whole piece. Also, you have a topic, but in the piece there really wasn't anything the reader could grab a hold of, to say "oh so thats what this is about", it seemed a bit empty and shit, but it was decent.

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