first of all ide like you to vote on this battle, its really slept on and i clearly won it but i cant get any body to vote on it and i really need some wins so vote on that and let me explain this peice, its a keystyle i wrote and a few lines in my mind kinda changed so jus go along with it, heres the battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79384

heres the keystyle

society has divided me, into unequal varities
subsided me, bitched at me and lied to me
then they decide to ride with me, then they hide from thee
struck 1st and sent back to reality
palms sweaty with my clinched fists im ready
my mind can be deadly, but my breaths have become heavy
not my time to die, but decide to ride in my chevy
(switch it up)
and the chevy dies, battery goes low
daddy gave me this car he was tired of payin the tow
found the interier on the side of the highway
steering wheel gets jamed so u hafta drive it sideways
gets about 100 miles to the tank
try to get a radio signal all i get is blank
we got 2 hubcaps missin, and all my nights ive been wishin
that the other 2 hubcaps that rolled off wouled come back the distance
the a-track player jams up all the tapes
and the seat is covered in stains i think its grapes
springs bustin outa seats, allways pokin my ass
with it constantly stallin no chance it goes very fast
lost the gas cap a while back
its colored primer but used to be black
i have to hot wire it and once i get it goin
cant let it die cuz if i get out the seats will get stolin
rearview mirrors got a fucken crack
frosts on the inside mufflers fuckin whack
it throws sparks when it drives
and the back seat cover is held on by tacks
allways out of alignment, and the roof has a big dent
i fell off of a bacony and the car is where i hit
in conclusion to this song, my fucken car is a peice of shit
and if a lady sees my car, no pussy for me, that means i wll never get a bitch

nice homeboy nice, vocab was good the wordplay was ight very interesting keep it up dawg your doin good

thanx man, still uppin for feedback, its a bitch how noones votin on our shit aint it tho

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yeah i know hey homeboy come check out my new freestyle

yep, still uppin for feedback

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uppin for feedback

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i was feelin it, the vocab was good as well as the wordplay, the topic was aight, and the content was hella good. good keystyle, keep postin and elevatin dude i enjoyed readin that.

yo return the favor please, its called changes, thanx