10 Lines Max . .

All Rules Apply . .

You Spit First . .

Aiyo, Ill light ya on fire, make ya toss the mic up so you can feel ya 'heat rise'
Come outta the closet, cuz we know you goin-to-prison aint the only time you hang wit 'bad guys'
Im amazing in gods eyes, 'cause ive heated up and elevated so fuckin much i made him go blind
Ill shoot you in the brain, so after this verse you'll 'never mind'
My rhymes are one of kind, this kid needs new clothes, just cause he wears them doesnt mean he has 'hoes'
Ive got seismic flows that make this paki paler then albinos (check his av)
Couldnt save for yourself, shopping at for-tino's.....Saul Goode? ha, watch me rip this jew
His rhymes are cold shit, thats why his avatar is A-POO
And yo, your not only just a cypher whore
I saw you wearin pantihoes outside of my convineince store...

rushed....spit

Look . .

After this, my Dick and your Mouth wont Divide
so ill give you some Time, to swallow my Pride.
this battles has 1 Side, and im on the Right One
my Verse will end you, before yours has Begun.
ill try to Keep your Pace, & move to FundaMentalz
his Resume is full. .of loses as his only Crudentials.
you show no Potential, you cant follow me in this Cypher
since you cant write, ill let you be my verse Reciter.
you are Mental Case, help doesnt come in this Merk Packet
his flow is scared of me, like i put it in a Straight Jacket.

My Verse Dropped Right After His . .

Dopeness . . .

Okay Let The Votes Begin . . .

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Okay Upping ( # 1 ) . . .
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DAMN THIS WAS CLOSE. . .

ILL TRY TO KEEP YOUR PACE, & MOVE TO FUNDAMENTALZ
HIS RESUME IS FULL. .OF LOSES AS HIS ONLY CRUDENTIALS.
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NICEST PUNCH IN THE BUNCH

IM AMAZING IN GODS EYES, 'CAUSE IVE HEATED UP AND ELEVATED SO FUCKIN MUCH I MADE HIM GO BLIND
ILL SHOOT YOU IN THE BRAIN, SO AFTER THIS VERSE YOU'LL 'NEVER MIND'
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NICEST PUNCH IN THE BUNCH. ..BUT WEAK

OVERALL I DIVIDED THE FLOWS & MY
VOTE=GOODE

Okay Uppin ( # 2 ) . .
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yo funda took this by a landslide. goode wasn't bad, but funda took it overall with the punches, and multis.

vote-fundamentalz

Ok im gonna break this down

Funda, you first
Aiyo, Ill light ya on fire, make ya toss the mic up so you can feel ya 'heat rise'
Come outta the closet, cuz we know you goin-to-prison aint the only time you hang wit 'bad guys'

^^thought this was a weak opener at first, but after i read it again a second time it was aight, decent punch.

Im amazing in gods eyes, 'cause ive heated up and elevated so fuckin much i made him go blind
Ill shoot you in the brain, so after this verse you'll 'never mind'

^^blah and blah, this was wack.

My rhymes are one of kind, this kid needs new clothes, just cause he wears them doesnt mean he has 'hoes'
Ive got seismic flows that make this paki paler then albinos

^^didn't like the first line but the second line was a very nice personal and a hard-hitting punch.

Couldnt save for yourself, shopping at for-tino's.....Saul Goode? ha, watch me rip this jew
His rhymes are cold shit, thats why his avatar is A-POO

^^ok, but you lost flow here cuz line 1 was much longer then line 2, also kinda messed up your structure.

And yo, your not only just a cypher whore
I saw you wearin pantihoes outside of my convineince store...

^^lol. Best bar of your verse in my opinion, nice finisher.

Overall-I didn't like your verse too much. I've seen a hell of a lot better from you. Your punches didn't hit too hard, flow was choppy, and structure was kinda messed up. 3.5/10

Saul, your turn.

After this, my Dick and your Mouth wont Divide
so ill give you some Time, to swallow my Pride

^^wow, nice opener, hell of a way too start.

this battles has 1 Side, and im on the Right One
my Verse will end you, before yours has Begun.
^^didn't like this too much although the flow was nice. Didn't hit hard.


ill try to Keep your Pace, & move to FundaMentalz
his Resume is full. .of loses as his only Crudentials

^^Damn.....nice fuckin line, possibly the best of the battle, very nice shit, hit hard as hell.

you show no Potential, you cant follow me in this Cypher
since you cant write, ill let you be my verse Reciter.

^^lol, funny, but not much of a punch.

you are Mental Case, help doesnt come in this Merk Packet
his flow is scared of me, like i put it in a Straight Jacket.

^^damn...nice finisher.

Overall-for the most part, a very nice verse. Perfect structure, smooth flow. 3 out of your 5 bars hit hard. Very nice verse in my opinion, but keep elevating. 7/10

I dunno, brooklyn said this was close, but I though it was one sided.

Vote=Saul

Prophecy = Dick Rider . . Bull Shit . .
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alright...everybody has their opinion...good battle so far, upping for votes............................................. ...................

But Prophecy Wasnt Even Explained . . .

Which Is A Total Bull Shit Vote . .

You Prolly Voted For Him, So He Returned The Favor . . .

My Point Exactly Is Right Here:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80694

Enjoy . . . . . . . . . . .

I am sorry for the free post but as said




c'mon man you gotta explain da votes kid; I would vote but I gott wait until my 100 post; that rule sux