iight dis is kinda my first open mic...so check it out
THIS SONG I WROTE IS ABOUT RACISM AND HATE....


.:VERSE 1:.
There’s A Few Things I need to say to muthafukas who live in a racist Way…I hate dis place..when people judge u by the colour of ur face,..
I know I’ve changed, but everyone needs a rearrange,..
One time in this day, I hope it will all be changed//
People dyin mummas feelin all da pain,..
When u say you aint hurt you u know ur just lyin..
Gangstas feelin hate resulting by guns firing..
The numbers of homeless blacks everyday keeps piling..
Black kids goin for jobs only the white wil be applying//
Been feeling alone for pretty much my whole life..
For once I tried to be good but I only ended up in strife..
Think it through not be stupid and end it wid a knife//
Police turning the blind eyes when watchin whites hittin blacks..
Speakin my mind not to person but wat I say in dese tracks..
People livin in poverty havin to survive by livin on tic tacs..
Kids getting picked on at school cause they to afraid to hit back,
So don’t stress bout dis shit just sit back and say//

CHORUS: Reapeat Once
All I do is just Speak Yo Mind
Not think about dem racist people, I guess I am one of a kind
So search deep down in ur heart, I know theres some good u can find//

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All the time I walk down the street and all I see is racist faces..
I seem to cry at night wid the words screamin in my head of black n white statements..//
I take this into consideration cause all the people that are dyin..
Wake up in the morning and think of what mummas prolly cryin..//
I take a breath…and step into a world that’s hate has no depth..
And I wonder what person has died of a hate related death..//
If they could just think of whats its like to be different..
To get beatin up and lie on ur bead not wantin to be livin..//
Feelin like someones stabbed u in the heart wid a dart..
To take a break to think that ur whole lifes been ripped apart..//
Shits pretty deep to see someone feelin the pain that u’ve seen..
I meen dat maybe some people don’t even know dat they mean..//
If u could jus see the pain dat they feel u prolly change too..
Racist fags picken on them so bad they feel they gotta leave school..//
Hate just comes bak to get u in the ass..jus call it bad karma..
Cause its gon happen dawg..so change or its gonna harm-ya..//

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All I do is just Speak Yo Mind
Not think about dem racist people, I guess I am one of a kind..
So dig deep down in ur heart, I know theres some good u can find//

REPEAT 2 TIMES

i want some feedbak iight Pz

so yeh thats it

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good wordplay,good imagery,good vocab,and good multis over all good spit,keep droppin tha hotness.~1~

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Hate just comes bak to get u in the ass..jus call it bad karma..
Cause its gon happen dawg..so change or its gonna harm-ya..//

word! liked your rhyme, good word play, thought these two lines were good. sounds like you've had personal experience of it, hav ya

hmmm yeh i've seen heapz of racism and karma and shit like dat and i was real pissed off one night and i wrote a song bout it so yeh.....

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YOUR AGRESSION ATTACKED THE PAGE IN WRITTING THIS A FEW MINOR SETBACKS IN YOUR RHYME BUT NOTHING DAMAGING AND WE CAN ALL ELIVATE SO THIS WAS A GOOD READ AND ILL PEACE HOLLA AT ME.

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damn homie you gonna haf to stop freepostin soon.....

Good pce, even though you ain't seen alotta racism as i know.... lol

pce man

yes i have u dont know what goes on when i am at home and what i see my dawgs goin through...

dont jugde lol......

Pz

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