Watch Me Now...Uhhhhhhhhhh

Out Write...

1 More Time.....

What Is It Today, like Being Hip Hop Orientated Is Rare
Busta Ill Free, Hear The Austounded Statements And Stares
You Say Were AllMost There? Shit, How Much Longer
And You Still Say Hip Hop Will Keep Growin And Get Stronger?
Are You Insane? I Must Say, That My Mind States On Elevation
Like A Closet Drug Addict, I Have To Stay Rappin Out The Basement
Id Love To See The Faces, When I Rhyme And Cause Amazement
HipHops Goin To Hell In A HandBasket And Im Goin On A Picnic Wit Satan
If I Got Shot In The Jaw, Would I Fall Or Rise To The Top
Like When 50 Got Popped..Now U Can Buy "G-Unit Bullet Proof Vests" In The Mall
Too Bad For Most, They Dont Sell Skillz At WallMart, I Hope They Dont Start
Cuz All These Herbs Are Rippin My Cultures Walls Apart
This Is A KeyStyle, I Hope You Like..No Wait.. I Dont
If I Wrote 300 Ill Tracks Id Still Get No Play So I Wont....

OutWrite Productions...

Hate If You Want..I Cant Hear You

Cuz Im Not Listnin... I Dont Speak Herb..

We Out...

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DejaVu


Nawfik's Out, Back To Chi...........

mass talent a lil like mine but you got it mastered im still working wit it

word i agree you got mad talent but you need to put your shit together better but other then that that was a hot drop

Werdizzle Kapizzle this was Ill. Nice keystyle, the G-unit line was funny.lol. Good shit, nice to see you droppin open mics again, but It should've been taken into more time and this shit would've been fire.

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

I rarely come in to open mic. So when I do I look for a title to a peice that catches my eye, and this one did.

This peice was not a dissapointment. Very talented with something meaningful to say. The structure/flow could use a lot of work, but the rest was pure diamond.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

this was an ill piece,good vocab,good rhyme scheme, i thought it could have been put together a little better but other than that this was ill,sometimes u gotta let them herbs know what it is.over all clean drop,keep spittin.~1~

^^Did You Get The Memo?^^

Your An Herb.. Im Not One Of Those Rappers That Sais Beleifs They Dont Meen..

i Discriminate Against Herbs...

And You Sir..Are An Herb

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Nawfik's Out, Back To Chi...........