Outlaw (Remix) Beat=Tupac's "Whatcha Gonna DO" from Better Dayz

Verse 1
BASH
More Or Less I Manafest And Contest When I Inject Specs And Mess Text When I Wreck Dilects Strong As Myoplex
Ya Lives That Inspecting Contribe,
And My Porpesctiong Subsides With Injections Of Knives And I Carve Swords In My Opponents Abdominals Till Their Sections Devide
Exstingushed Gene Brances And Crufiex To Discet ya Neck
Then cover your nose wit a pillow Till ya Breath Reflex
Shatter your Leg....Cause I'm an OutLaw
And I'm a leave you shading blood all over the battle floor
ma Raft of Lightening Ignited Intended to Blast the 'Brightest
Till All Mass Divided into a 'Long path where Christ Sits
Simple Sacrifices Thats wut life is Sad & Frightened
U coulda Kept ya Cast from Dyin Instead a axis of emcees are flying
Heat n Spark the 'Creepy Carcass' of all Cadaver's Hidin
Click N Spark , When my gun starts shootin
Mornin 2 Dark , MCs are what I'm murdering
Punchin Peeps in Half Undernath the Grass of a 'Flattened Island
I'm an OutLaw 4 Lyfe...Now checkout my nigga Withersman


WITHERSMAN
You probably, think my ignition in life is going to the penitentiary//
my visions is hectic causing me to ball on these niggas vehemently//
NIgga, my cold heart leavin these niggas under concrete walls//
when I kill I use a variety of onslaughts like isopropyl alcohol//
the people who test me are like iridium//
brittle to the core, so I can get rid of them//
This Outlaw right here don't take shit//
mutha fuckas reflexin harmlessly from just one hit//
megalomaniacs get ripped with da razor//
tracheotomies go to all the fuckin haters//
I used to be mediumistic//
until the day came, when all this shit became realistic//
deadly as SARS, even more when I have the gun and holster//
niggas shakin so bad they rock the seismograph off the roster//
These cowards win a fight and their heads get to big//
If they fuck with me I'll leave three holes in your skull like the Regime Sig//




Verse2
BASH
Dash When my 'Solar Axe is RIsin to Hack Horizon's....
SMackin Iron thru The front n Bak of a Fa990ts Iris.....
From Sparrin wit Bionic Fore arms geT Wrapped in Wires....
Shockin Twirps ...Gashed on fire...Trapped n Tired
Lookn for a Path to Dry on- in my Dna splashed Empire
Finally u Gaspin Squires can Witness Traumatix Higher
wit no gats required my Attax 'hold Impact' like Plyers'....
I dont 'Paint pictures of Nature' but my arts are straight wild
aNb till I die
I jus 'Spit Sicker' then 'Eminem' when he 'Barfed in 8MILE'
U niggas claim that ur an outlaw....But your act and Rhymes aint Raw
Vocal Destruction.....This is a Definition of an iLL collaboration
One Invasion....Bash and Withersman will Crack your whole Legislation
Shatter your Opposition in one Deadly Motion
Immolate Peasantz With Lethal Sharp Vocal Chordz, Dismember Spleenz With Bladez That Strike With Da Power Of Muscular Horses
Hang you on Crosses , Hit you wit a Massive Amount Losses

[Hook]
I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you dont want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy//
you got beef you'll be sleeping eternally//
{repeat}

WITHERSMAN
Oh shit, another mom has to see the sarcophagus//
due to the velocity of a bullet to her son's esophagus//
too wild for the streets, police need to catch me//
cuz all the hard thugs are like danseuses to me//
fuckin with an Outlaw will leave you modularized with bullets//
cuz I'm tellin you, if there's steel in my hand I wont hesitate to pull it//
Mind full of strife, nothin less//
you got beef with me, better wear your vest//
cuz Withersman's, a dedicator to the AK//
sprayin bullets like they were some mutha fuckin hair spray// HEY!
ridin with aNb as long as I live//
spittin straight streets, is what I'm gonna give//
I'm like da holocaust to these pussies//
didn't warn you niggas not to push me//
I told you once before, why u commin back for more//
don't wanna see your mama floodin up the floor, I'm an Outlaw//

[Hook]
I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you dont want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy//
you got beef you'll be sleeping eternally//
{repeat}

uppin

Upping the shit outta this..........

Nice drop fam,


nice vocab used in here.....good concept...i liked to read this piece, really was a nice read, i would suggest to make it an audio....i think it would be tite......very nice drop..props*

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Thanks

Upping....Stop sleeping........

ZzzzzzzzZZzzzzzzzzzz...........No one hasnt returned the favour

nice shit from both aya'll..good in almost every category, the hook is nice and simple, with that hard third line, this was pretty solid all around.

Yo withersman, imma have to look up some of the words you spit there, thanx for that. Nice vocab, but not overdoing it, i thought it fit well.

Bash that was some slick wordplay and multi's, made for a pretty hype flow.

solid.

i was defenitly feelin this, the concept was tight, the vocab and wordplay was off the hook, and i agree wit thugz do cry this would be an awesome audio. good shit, keep postin yall i really enjoyed readin that

peace.....

Sorry, man...

Office got hectic late yesterday.

This piece, like the other cat said, would make great audio.

The vocab was very well chosen to add complexity.

The flow seemed to stay steady throughout.

I personally like Open Mic's to be somewhat deeper.

This was an extended battle track for lack of a better description.

But the message came across loud and clear and I could seriously see two cats like DMX (Bash) and Snoop (Withersman, don't know why the voice of Snoop hit me when I read his verses, it just did) slingin this with some dope beats backin them up.

Very nice drop for something that's mostly kill, kill, kill.

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Born To Kill , thanks dawg.............Still upping

yo i felt this one. it was all hot man, be sure to make it audio cause it should be hot man. can u check out my new drop history (african dreams) please? peace

Thanks dawg........................aNb straight to the top