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What I'm bout
IP: C1DA C961
I dont need short cuts im takin ya hoods route/
Any beef I'll be puttin ya whole hood out/ On my toes always keepin a look out/ No guns so i guess we will be bringin the wood out/ I dare for you to run up thats like calling all the streets out/ Got my bat so i can Barry Bonds ya teeth out/ Do it wit precision as if a nigga was gettin paid man/ Bring in the boys hold you down while ya house get raid man/ You a sweet cat you dont bleed you pour Kool-Aid man/ Im a picky nigga only bang with the hardest/ Push ya luck but how you gonna put down the heartless/ You dont wanna jump up but im feelin kinda froggy/ You could be innocent but my judgement is kinda foggy/ You dont need to show ya fear i can smell it and it makes me cocky/ Put you in intensive care as you fade away ya family will scream ya name as if you was rocky/ Dont judge me cause my age i could be king of the streets/ Im real most cats only claimin they street/ Salvation of Hip-Hop is already out of our reach/ It's like all that is fake came and took the game away from the streets/ Livin in the US im just Surrounded by fake/ Whats sad is that America was even founded by snakes/ But still there is no one hard enough to take me outta this place/ Cause they know things can get heated like Kobe and a white girl in confind space/ |
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IP: C1DA C961
This my first post on this site so criticize me or whatever. Just tell me how to improve.
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IP: 399E F0FD
feelin da flow..... you could work on some wordplay... that wouldent hurt
your style aint emcee lik its mo towards da streets.... so you could work in mets n puches jus to make it intresting and still get you point across.. it aint bout wha you say its how you say it... keep elavatin.... |
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IP: 3CAA FAA2
dawg that was ill your word play was just a little simple and kind of predictable other than that you stuck to the script it was a hot read-"ONE"
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IP: 1B3B C284
it was pretty complete, didnt let down, overall a good effort
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