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im decling all ya health u comin up killedd/
u remind me of myself when i wasnt this Ill//
ill splutter an spill vocab all over the floor//
if u dont no im raw mutherfukerget real//
get touched wit the steel bigger holes in ya pores//
cap com ya wak ass rhymes cant come strong//
u cudnt get a keyed verse out smokin hot if u hit ut a bong//
how long does it take to tell u da truth u aint a vet//
i bet u just a fag who lives on da net u wanna be noob//
my metaphors metamorph putin ya death to near//
an i hear ya mommy sayin igot da strap on dear let me put it up ya rear//
cuz u fear ill rapped that come hard on da mike//
sike u suk dik fuke a fair fite im grippin ya hair tite//

aitn done

LOOK at me im a net thug that recives head slugs//
an batttles cats everyday i dont have a life as u can see im a thug//
that thinks i can rap cuz no one can see that im white//
i post 30 times a day an in a week ive battled 12 kids witout a mike//
does that make me an mc now wow never new it was that easy(Herb)//
please b ya ass is weak g an u bouta be meerked

hey imma holla back on this battle when the otha kat be spittin....................then imma drop a vote on one of yall......holla

Lyrikally insane put them lame raps back on the shelf
U the only stupid Motha fucka I know Who Disses himself
Watch...As my 9mill kisses ya health, Leavin u lifeless
Fuckin Dyke Bitch... Took dicks up his ass & He liked it (LoL)
Who ever Heard of battle rappers from Kentucky? (Where he from)
Not me...As You can see, U might get overlooked if ya lucky
I told ya stupid ass the battle was only supossed to be 10 lines max
I guess that shit didnt register between ya brain, and that fuckin ear wax
Lemme relax, Cuz this newb aint shit..He spits are weak
While Mines Flow like ragin Rivers, yours float like pissy creeks

LoL Man I"m done thats all I needed to beat this cat lol
Lets get some votes in here.

DAMN!! capcom wit another merk straight gave it to dis nigga he came wit everything nown to drop on a spit MERK!!! nuff said holla

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one sided battle here LI hardly even rhymed his verses, he had no flow and most of it was self promotion, Capcom, had harder punches more flow, better structure was more enjoyable to read and it had more wordplay,.. opinion: MERK

vote - capcom

One sided merkin...

Sad, really...

Horrible format and rhyme scheme, not to mention the closer.

Cap had everything, mostly punches though.

The "disses himself" and "earwax" lines buried him.

Sorry, dude...
Just keep at it and read what other cats be doin...
You'll learn

Peace

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For my convenience, not yours!

Cap Took This...Better Verse...Strong Punches...Tsk Tsk...

Lyrikally Needs Elevation

Vote-Capcom

LoL Capcom Ripped This Guy He Hit Harder All Along........
Punches-C
Flow-Both
Personally-Non Really...
creativty-C
Wordplay-C

Vt-Capcom

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