Okay I got it right this time (and it's not like I'm recycling) I made a rookie mistake so give a rookie a break alright?

Rules:
10 lines max
No d/r, crew or hater votes
Must Explain votes

I'll go first. You can drop yours whenever you check in.
Here's my post:

U spend more time in the closet than jackets don't cha buttercup
Gag you with the mic I feel the need to shut this muthafucker up

Cause your "talk is cheap" like you be using 10-10-220
Got more secrets than Victoria you and your men-friends-screw-plenty (gently lol)

So I run you down like everybody else who-stepped-in-the-way
Rig this post like a grenade pull the pin prompt a 2-second-delay

Show you my (__|__) here why don't you give it a peck
Everytime I come through here better learn to hit the deck

I'll treat you like an inmate that just dropped the soap now
I'll scare you so straight you wouldn't want to get poked (owww)

ok just got home and just saw this so i will post up in a bit
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starting to type now......

Like An Alchohol Free Campus College You Come With Weak Barz
Beating Your Rhymes Gonna Be Easier Then Trapping Air In Jars
Rubbing My Penis Is The Only Way This Girl's Gonna Get A Stroke Of Genius
Carmen's Slow Minded, Spits Dumb Lines Like Retarted Bulimics
Cripping Stupidity Like Carrot Top Doing The C-Walk Is Your Only Handicap At The Moment
Mimicing Anorexic Rodents Dropping Cheesy Lines This Girl's Been Known To Bite Opponents
Like A Boa On Noah's Ark Your Flow's On A Tight Squeeze
You Make The Crowd Jump As Much As Crippled Fleas

^^I didn't use any quote or anything but wordplay's there.

good luck with the votes carmen

uppin fo votes
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aight ama give this to rappad...............both ya'll had good punches altho not devastating.....but rappads flow went nice with his......sooooo

vote=rappad

hit this up..........cheers

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80805

Both Had Tight Verses But Im Goin With Rappad For More Complexity And Stronger Punches.Carmen Had More Punches And Creativity But His Punches Werent Strong Enough

Vote-Rappad

carmen had the better verse.. better punchlines, nicer multies

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I gotta give this one to Rappad, his punches hit more harder, tho his flow was off, made it up back with the creativity

Vote= Rappad

this was a tight battle, both verses had good vocab,carmens flow lacked alittle more on punches than rappad,good imagery,well laid out,i was feelin rappads verse more though,keep spittin tha realness.~1~

my vote----Rappad

uppin for one more vote.....
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