his rules, (he will post them below)
MAD PREACHER SPITS FIRST

verses due 10pm rb time...(a nigga just got into some beef..a nigga is on charge!)

10 lines

no d/r..crew..hate votes

votes must be explained....

poll vote...3-0 k.o.

blaze or get blazed!


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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S

hahahaahahaha....hoe!



First things first son…imma be quick_and go for the kill, and like mike_ you spittin in NEVER-land you wont EVER come-ill//
Then again if you ‘came down’_ from ya death-case-sickness, no one is ever gonna witness_ this-bitches, ATTEMPT of an exempt elect_ on the ‘Bally’ total-votes by ya lyrical ‘Fitness’//
I ‘punch-lines’ harder_ than ya New York ‘printin press’, my rhymes is guaranteed to cause choke_ might cave in ya chest, even if you grew ‘titties’_ ya rhymes wouldn’t ever come ‘close’ to ‘A-breast’// (Abreast: definition –close)
why art thou-eth a faggot? REPENT! you swine of hells evil doth sent! I tried to give this herb “Pennies�-for-his-thoughts, and this EINSTEIN still ‘don’t_make_no’ “Cents�//
C.U.M. has got them ‘pussy lips’_ that couldn’t be-any-FYNA, I spit out “cotton mouth� exposin ya ‘tubes’_ givin you “Bronchitis� of-the-VIGINA//
Man at the end of each sentence_ im ‘dotin’ my COM, but forgot to add the ‘period’_ when I mentioned-ya-mom//

Switch

But son fear-is-a-factor, my 'madd' style is saught after, but this fag cant ‘bite-the-act’ like he a ‘Shaq-fu-master’//
Im ‘supreme law of the land’ and so ya ‘balance’ is ‘checked’, I aim the gavel direct-at-ya-chest, *I find this homo guilty!*_’preach’ throw ‘the book’ at this hoe an claim this-niggas been-‘blessed’//



fuck the last two lines




igido

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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S

^^ that wasnt 8 lines, that was 8 bars,, each of your "lines" was a complete bar, that makes 2 lines each in the structure i use, so i will be writing 16 lines to fairly compete

No One Likes-Dissing-Me, I Make Your Life-A-Misery
Then I Erase Your Rep Like Your Porn Site-History
Born With A Light-Deficiency You’re Always In The Dark
You Ain’t Got No Guns Like The Warriors In Central-Park
When You Present-Your-Art Its Hammered, I Let The Mel-Slide
This Kids A Piece Of Knob Cheese He Even Reps The Bellside
If I See YOU In The Club Then It’s Time To Hit The Floor-Man
Got More-Fam, The Doorman Holds You Till I Got A Sore-Hand
You Get A Fore-Hand And Cry But I’m Afraid Nobody Noticed
I’m Glad This Isn’t Live Coz I Can’t Stand Your Halitosis
I Know These Thoughts Show Your Cheap Lines Lack-In-Cost
You Leave this Battle Red Faced Like Grandma Caught You Jacking-Off
Your Lacking, You’re Soft, If You Wore A Condom You Couldn’t Cum-Tite
Yeah You’re From The Street You Got A Starring Role In Bum-Fights
Some-Night I’ll Come And Get You, Storm Madd Preachers Churches
And Burn-It, Act Perverted And Crucifix Ya Mommas Cervix

Tight Battle.Both Had A Lot Of Punches But COM's Punches Were Stronger.He Had Some Nice Wordplay Too.Overall A More Complex Verse

vote-COM

Damn! Damn! Damn!
Like Florida Evans up in here!

Tight fucking battle...

I'll tell you...

COM got that ass kicked ruthlessly...

Up until his "halitosis" line!

I don't know if I've ever seen a comeback in a battle rap, but today I did.

The end of COM's verse was just tight as shit.
Vicious. Punches like Tyson of old, man.

Preacher ripped this and took the multi's and complexity, maybe the wordplay...

But COM rained (reigned) over the punches, the personals, the metas, and the flow.

And the humor (the grandma/jerking line had me laughing hard)

Close, but my vote: COM

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not even close-played lines killed preachers chances for any thing....also learn what bars an lines are and the differences between them....

Vote- COM-by a frigin landslide...

This was a pretty dope battle....Breakdown

Punches: Com
Personals: Mad
Multi's: COM
Wordplay: MaD
Meta's: CoM

Vote = Com

Good shit from the both of you...much props

vt-Com
His Structure Wasnt Herbish.......
He Punched Harder...
Wordplay Was a Tiny Bit Corny...
But Fair
The Other Guy Sucked.......
And He Dint Throw a Solid Punch.....

good battle nigs...i take it how it went...i need to elevate...COM ya verse had me laughin as well...

and as for duke up there^^^ mental...ya need to head back to elementary and learn the basics son...i did have punches you fucking idiot....

even if you grew ‘titties’_ ya rhymes wouldn’t ever come ‘close’ to ‘A-breast’//

thats a punch...dumb cock....how the fuck are you 23-11...unless you battle newbies...

hahaha...


igido

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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S

givin it to COM, very easy to read structure, very solid and many funny punches, had a few multis, and i liked how he setup his punches, and hit style is very original, and his flow was nice too.

preach your verse wasnt bad, but very confusing to read, fiz the structure, come with more punches and less player punches and better wordplay..

vote-com


im not sure if ill be able to pollvote, ive PMed the end numerous time before he left and so far i havent got registered unless he finally did b4 he left, so ill try anyway.

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vote-COM

he had better punches and his punches hit harder he had a better structure and a better flo....good battle