i have a lyrical style that untouchable//
my shit is so complex, that it untraceable//
disgraceable//
it wat i call wen you touch the decks//
ur shit aint sound complex//
u gettin fucked up so much, dat u should call me sex//
i stomp the shit out u with fuck "AIR FORCES ONES"//
an blast u wit heat that resemble 'AIR FORCE GUNZ'//


it only a few lines i kno, an the ryme pattern aint so great,
but if sum 1 could rate it an point me in da right direction,


dat wud be sweet as a nut

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