10-15 lines
we both eckin an have 35 minutes pretty much ill be done sooner prolly..
u down
lets make this quick......

by da way cehckninnnnnnnnnnnnn
cud u check in too so i no udown..wit it.....an yea....lets do thisccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc

Checkin in...

Good luck, man...

35 minutes from now...

I'm starting.

May the best verse win.

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Ya Lyrics are whack, it's why ya Insane ta come at me...
Set my laptop on my boombox cuz I DO 'stereotype' ya a newbie!
With the season begun, lemme put my foot ta ya balls...
But can't seem ta find any, ya pants like empty pool halls.
So drop ya sack, son and 'finally grow into a man'
But you just hear queer, and wanna follow the plan.
Ya must grow lines in dirt the way ya 'soil' ya rhymes...
Overwatering with idiocy, ya couldn't be dope if you's High Times.
It's like ya pay for cornfields cuz ya buyin the farm...
Like iron fortune cookies ya fates sealed and eatin em's causin harm.
Like canine euthanasia, I'm puttin this dog's rhyme ta sleep...
Spit like gas till ya life pass and ya owner's start ta weep.
So Lyrical...this beatings just a lesson, don't get too sad...
Cuz I cold drove ya Insane like I'm wearin a chauffeur's hat.

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I merked this newb through no show...

Could I get this closed, please...

I shoulda known better but I was eager to battle.

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Good luck? Bitch, don’t switch up your game//
Wished me luck cuz you were hoping I would wish you the same//
Cuz you know you’ll need it; all my scripts are great//
I don’t want you to get lucky and beat me, so I won’t reciprocate//
And luck strikes in strange ways; it’s due to happen//
Like in the form of my Gateway computer crashing//
I pack a pistol pen; you know my shit will win//
You should post with longer bars to fit more disses in//
I’m proving I am a menace; you’ll lose when I end this sentence//


.::Switches Prose::.


You shouldn’t have spit, how much you going to risk? //
I got this kid all up in arms like a deodorant stick//
Kid don’t try to front, I’m the reason you fell//
I’ll kill you, then kill myself just to see you in hell//
There’s no stopping this, so what the fuck you hoping for? //
I rock cement shoes just to jog on the ocean floor//

L.I did'nt really have any disses that cause an impact..his punches was kinda soft....his last two line on the first verse was his best...be a lil more creative

B2K starter was iight but it coulda been tighter...wordplay was decent...punches hit a lil bit better cause he added some creativeness to em........overall to me b2k had the strongest verse....

vote born

umm i think born had a harder verse, punchlines frum the newb wrent to hard and thought out, very weak and pointless

work on it kid

vote-born

yo born please hit this up dawg or who ever sees this

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80905

B2K starter was iight but it coulda been tighter...wordplay was decent...punches hit a lil bit better cause he added some creativeness to em........overall to me b2k had the strongest verse....

vote born

AGREE...lyrical u feel off.....u gotta step ya game up.....

drop a vote.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81317

i dotn knwo man.. born to kills verse seemed more directed to the other dude.. lyrically insane had aiight shit.. but im giving my vote to born to kill on this one

Uppin for the nail in the coffin...

Thanks for the votes, people who have given them...

Much appreciated.

Send another this way and we close this forever.

Thanks

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