Word~Perfect:

IN the image of being musicians my intuion got me trippen- flippen positions-
its real liven like~
we under the gun under the knife,
under my life, stairing at weapons.
I feel like I have to rush my way to heaven-in death to be a legend.
This is for the deceased for influenc~en-to show I respect them-as women or men.
Say they names looking up cause you never fell!
plus you got to be there if you no longer in this hell.
ALIYAH didn’t rap-but her life is a wrap-I had to so say her name cause I respect her in fact.
I don’t have to question my faith-
GOD sent us and An aNgel it was time for you to return to that place.
but you wont be replaced the memory wont erace and when I say your name I will say it with grace.
Spit big puns for BIG PUN tattoo a Puerto Rican flag-rep my PR for you and me too… I do it to brag.
WE proud of you twin and I will always be a loyal fan-respect y0u like fam-
2 countries broke boundries thanks to just one man.
It hard to believe since i started to m.c. what ive seen-
the east and west’s best plus the death of a SPORTY THIEVE-
the end of RUN DMC-plus RUTHLESS aint so ruthless without EAZY.
I could just cry-send a (TC) for CHILLI and T-BOZ … L~efteye god bless….
T~ake C~are and goodbye.
Smoke one… for harlems finest but this BIG L-
cant take back the fact or act of how FREAKY TAH and ROCKEFELLER fell-
don’t worry MR.NOBLE the name will be herd global.
People will know them the way that they know you.
Ask FATAL or the LOX if they can FEEL ME?
(quote shiek: “nearly broke down 2 times writing this verse”)
and since it hurts- I’m a murk JA for jumping on PACS’ cock -its no BIGGIE
It’s a small token of appresiation- for how you inspired a nation.
I dedicate myself to your representation-
and if you think they career died im given it respiration.
For the men I give my amens-
bang on my chest twice you will breath again-
god bless twins.
For the men I give my amens-
bang on my chest twice you will breath again-
god bless twins.

King of Thievez:

may God bless the story that I'm inspired to tell...
God bless the true mc'z that are alive and are well...
from KRS-1 reppin' BDP...
to Necro blessin' me with cult classic DVD'z...
peace to Thirstin Howl and Ill Bill who taught me to rob...
while quotin' Eminem nearly lost me a job...
God Bless 50 though he overrated as hell...
shout out to Styles P and Beans spittin' flames from ya cellz...
much love to Cormega...I was touched when ya came...
Ali Vegas and Juelz for bringin' us young bucks to the game...
and although I never earned no college scholarship...
Canibus taught me how to speak knowledge when I spit...
Busta Rhymes came to the game with an impeccable flow...
that makes a nigga wanna wiggle from they head to they toez...
Jay-Z and Nas had beef but they speech was very wise...
Copywrite hit my head with punchez till I was nearly paralyzed...
Cage taught me what it was like to be suicidal and fail...
while ODB taught me what it's like while doin' cyclez in jail...
Fabolous taught me how to keep my flow on point...
while Red, Meth,and Snoop taught a nigga how to blow on joints...
Pharoahe Monch was waitin' behind closed doors tellin' me to get the fuck up...
MOP told me to ante up before my body gets found in a dump truck...
when I come through...Inspectah Deck's like That's that nigga...
I ate of the Bad Seed and I'm gettin' flashbacks quicker...
I learned from AZ about the thievez and the crooks...
I think Mobb Deep taught everybody the meaning of shook...

we need a hook

ummm...yeah we do...can ya send it to me?????? or we can back and forth it if ya want...

another dope 2 verses lol, very thought out an creative you both had mad flow an the story was no doubt heat, definitly 9.5/out'a ten, tight drop ye 2 peace

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^^^ummm...thanks man...I guess we can keep it up like it is now until we get a hook up in it...

naa wuznt great...
u wuz tryin 2 hard 2 get multi's that it seemed played,
but the flow wuz tyte i have 2 admit

^^^where do you see a played multie?????? this is the 1st time I seen this subject done before so how can the multiez be played??????

ok...can we get some more feedback...preferrably by people with more than 1 post...

good job.
tob honest i was feelin king more...he stuck to subject better.
word perfects flow was off to me, king flowed nicely, yall still get props tho. nice drop.

^^^thank you my adopted son...I fuckin' love you man...

nice verse yo, props, nice shit

love it, peep dis post by me "Keystyle on real life events~ from da heart"

^^^thanks dog...uppin'...

nice shit fam....omens reppresent....hell yeah...THAT WAS FUCKIN SICK....the rappers and shit nice drop both yall
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~1ne
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thanks ya kindly audi...