All Of This Is Circumstance (Part One)

MeNTiLL
deacon

Damn God why'd it have to be me
I thought walkin down that alley was gonna be easy
How did he see me?
Fucc if I know, But when I tell Deac I doubt he'll believe me
I ain't a bitch but, FUCC! I juss had to be tha victim of a stick up
Good it's ringin' I hope this nigga picks up

Hello

Yea yo, You wouldn't believe wat juss happened
I was walkin to my crib, AHHH! Fuccin' bastard
I decided to take a shortcut, but fucced up
This nigga juss rolled up on me, Fucc an explanation, I GOT STUCK UP!!
FUCK! SLUT! SHIT! BITCH! Aight hold up let me calm down
He didn't even say reach for tha sky, I kept my palms down
All he did was pull back tha hammer and I froze
Stiff from my head to my toes, Hold up let me suppress my bloody nose
Bloody Hoes! Like that nigga didn't have sumthin better 2 do
I hope U can gimme sum advice, I couldn't think of no1 to call better than you
Imma war veteran to, U would think by tha way I act I woulda done sumthin
But I started frontin, Tryna get away but he still left me with nuthin
He took my chain, money, Tha plastic card that contains my picture and name
Damn Im aggravated and feelin' pain, I hope you understand wat Im sayin
Are You Listenin? Are you fuccin' hearin' wat Im tellin you?!?!?!

Yea

Aight my bad fam, Sorry bout tha yellin dude
Damn my eyes swellin' too, This nigga took everything I had
I was bitched by a nigga wit no weapon, And I thought I was bad
That's fuccin sad, He even took my socks and my belt
Aight man Imma shut tha fucc up, Wat do U gotta say that'll help?

Im hearing you and even the tears that fall...
let it be known i have your back through them all...
This cat had no reasoning for life thats when things turned wrong...
So to better himself he picked you all along....
You seemed a bit unaware of what was going on...
So he took you up on the offer, two hits of concreteand it made you feel weak....
Its not hard to beat a brother down when your hidden with no sound...
So tell me what to do man and i'll be there...
I wish i could take some of that pain to share....
This family,this time, I care....

(ring)

Yo mentill hold up dawg someone on the line

click--

To Be Continued....

not bad, i was feelin that..good flow on some part...word play was okie..i think you could of read it over an tryed to re-word something to make it sound more in depth, but good piece..check my hypothisis keystyle out 1

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ditto<<<<<<<that sounded gay...........ditto i mean.......i liked this quite much coz i was feeling ya wordplay all throughout the piece.................aight nice piece

interesting drop, something new , *wonders what part 2 will be like* anyways keep up the good shit\




*I was bitched by a nigga wit no weapon, And I thought I was bad
That's fuccin sad, He even took my socks and my belt
Aight man Imma shut tha fucc up, Wat do U gotta say that'll help?
* lol

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