::intro::
Uh oh....

Yea!...

::flow::
Aiyyo, Im Back... and Im ready for war
Who dat be steppin out tha black and red car
I see DOA makin high money and ranks
Bein spotted wit women... No not skanks
Aiyyo... Im tha Top dawg in tha game
Im makin cheese that remain tha same
No pushin on tha corner... and no sellin
Cause I see my fans... and I hear em yellin
For tha realest.... and only tha illest
What I need... is all y'all people to feel this
It may not be Twix but its all in tha mix
This shit is all legal no behind tha back tricks

::break::
La-Da-Da-Dat... Dat,Dat.. Dat.. Dat-Dat...

::flow cont'd::
Sorry for tha news flash on u rookies
Im out tha oven like chocolate cookies
J, Dash, D, A, Y remains my name...
Ima stay tha same in tha game wit my fame
Unstoppable... Untoppable....
Ur bullet to my head is unpoppable
Be like Neo... In tha Matrix....
But its not tha Matrix, U dumb ass bitch
Fake niggaz like urself deserve to be dead
Im tha nigga that'll put u on ur death bed
Im killin tha tracks and ownin tha streetz
I got tha best niggaz wit me on tha beatz
Simple type rhymers use simple vocab
Killer type rhymers be in a co-llab
W-A-N... T-E-D...
D-O-A... Yea, That'll be me...
Who else u know that flow through ya?
Put a ho to ya? Blow to ya? Send hollows through ya...
No one... Im tha one... thats bustin tha gun
And I wont stop till tha clip's are done
Im fittin find one that test ur chest
And if ur not strong... I guess u'll be at rest
I got a gat and it goes...

::break::
La-Da-Da-Dat... Dat,Dat.. Dat.. Dat-Dat...

::flow cont'd::
Off tha head wit dis fuckin shit
I'll be dead wit dis fuckin shit...
This'll make tha charts and be a hit
in tha Hip-Hop:Freestyle joints and shit

::break::
La-Da-Da-Dat... Dat,Dat.. Dat.. Dat-Dat...

::end::
Aiyyo....

I'm back...

FreestyleFelons... Eneyekay... or however
tha fuck u say ur bitch ass name...

It's over...

Wanted DOA is takin tha crown
on this shit... y'know...

It wasnt worth gettin into it wit
ur asses... but o well...

Plus where's ur other 3 members
J-Money?.. they quit cause of me?

Plus eneyekay... get sum straight
friends... not gay...

hahaha.... Its Wanted....
D-O-A!!!

hmmm....

really didn't feel da line about... what was it? "Unpoppable"
ok maybe im jus not as up n up on da latest wanksta, er... um, gangsta lingo....

But truly dude U kept the flow legitimate and to me that's what matters....

some of the guys that post in here just like looking at their words instead of saying them... ya feel me?

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Yup... understand ya loud and clear yo. Uppin on this piece yo.

Yeah this was a good piece, good read i thought too, you had good flow through out the piece, you had good vocab, and your content seemed good as well, overall id say it was a good piece, keep dropping.