ok these the rules 10-20 lines
no prewrite
no dr
no crew votes
explained votes and gots 2 be on poll to count
u spit first deadline is tommrow 3:25 pm eastern time tommrow

So hollaz

3-0 ko
first to 5 wins

Aiight I'll spit Tonight Homey I gotz 2 battles dogg

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LetZ get these FactZ StraighT i'm Willing to Clap FakeS.....
And Chew out and Spit out textcees like you Like Wack SteaK....
I put My Dick on your movie Script,kid now your Act's RapEd....
N if you pushing nething around it's prolly your Dad's Fat Weight....
You a Frontin Fag you suck dick, Spit ,N Tattle....
I spit slavemaster Lyrics so u Get Whipped N Paddled....
Only time you FUCKED with BEEF was when you Did A CattlE....
Only Hot Shit i feel from Brave is his BiTTer BreaTh....
HAHA your jokes are over now like John Ritters Death....(r.i.p.)
N all these RB Dickz are intended for ya mouth like LiTTered Crest....(get it)
The Slugz i CarrY are like open heart Sugeries how they Intend To Rip~Ya~Chest.....
10 lines and yet haven't got the BesT of Me....
After this battle his career will fall like Skin Wit Lepracy......
U got no HONEYS no way not even if u was a ResTLess BEE.......
Im WreckLeSS B n if he wins most likely He~Prayed.........
This bitch more pussy than LesBian Orgies How da fuck can HE BE~BRAVE........
You stayin UNDERGROUND son like seeds of RabishEs.........
But he Ain't emerging cause only thing Brave on him is his jersey with GREG MADDUXX........HA ~1

yo u got 20 mins to post son or else u know show cause i posted the time on rules and u agreed so hollaz

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Yo

Panik Couldnt Hold Greatness If He Had My Dick in his hand, You Can Tell This Kid crazy Fo Nutz Cuz He Suckin Penis On Demand I'll Crash Your Party Like Tha Terminator Causin Havoc An Grief, Cuz Im Like A Machine Packin Some Heat Cuz Im Attached To My Piece/
I’ll Catch You Pretendin So I Cant Initiate My Demise, Snap All Your Fingers Cuz I Love To Hear Tha Sound Of Cries, Blatant Pound Of Guys, I’ll Break Down Your Thigh’s Till You Walk Awkward From Tha Round Of Nines/

your trace is vacent from impatient razor blades, leave your face vapor slayed,
an the paper made wud be the same exchange rate as lame pocket change,
your plain like talkin the same as any brain contained soldier,whos object'es game,
except i rearrange your veins wit the pain contained from my holster,
hold up, have you sayin please explain, a king? i dun told yah when i crip yah,
your just like another clit fucked ripped up condom i gotta get rid of,
missed none, your a slow one,so im open, an claim im stuck battlin a 56k modem wit high speed,do i know'em? no, but this wanna' be druggie's lucky he just got hit BY ME,wanna see this sick fuck mike free, garunteed you'll be blinded ina crisis,
subsided from your mindless dick rydin,your prizeless,
like a 5'6 bitch inflicting violence on a titan,ima leave you lifeless and inlightened....

Damn I just key'd I need to practice more homey ~1

I’m Drillin This Kidd Wit Empirical Spits, Looks Like You Down An Out For This Round Cuz Im Killin Your Wits,Im Still Peerin Your Spits Like God Be Watchin My Miracle Shit …You Aint No Fuckin Serial Killer …You More Like A Serial Bitch/

uppin

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Wow...The second that I read Be Panik's first line i knew he would kick Brave's ass up and down this place, and he did. I have never seen anyone say "penis" in a rap before except for you. You gotta do less talkin about your dick and more time dissin. If i could vote, vote would go to Panik.

Favorite Line:Panik (Quote)
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N all these RB Dickz are intended for ya mouth like LiTTered Crest....(get it)
The Slugz i CarrY are like open heart Sugeries how they Intend To Rip~Ya~Chest....
.................................................. .................................................. .....Straight Up Dopeness Panik

vote here honestly plz..............................
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Uppin

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Uppin 1~0 but not really cause doesn't get polled so 0-0 Uppin this shit people please vote all vote only if u gcan poll please non of that freepostin shit but thnx for the feed back ha

i vote hitpanik.....

he came wit a lil bit shorter lines an harder punches....
not much werd play or multi's on either side....
braves structure was like paragraph form-an it basicly read more like a story than a battle.....too many lines to begin wit-an dont use the word openis unless ur a doctor....

no personal evaluation but here's an overall breakdown..............

punches=hit
structure and flow=hit......i couldnt find brave
wordplay=brave
metas=jus hit
origanality=brave...it was a bit weird thats why i liked it

aight both verses dint contain no heat........a lotta shit was played......no examples to save the person getting mad.....but hit did easily get this

hit=vote

1~0 uppin this shit yo no doubt appreciate the feed back son hollaz i know i did this quick wasn't no effort put into this shit ~1

i thought hit tookt this wit better punchs thats it everything else was even its gonna be a close battle and a very good one at that but hit edged this victory out wit his punchs vote hit and pees hit this shit up wit an honest vote aight niggas peace


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