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Old 10-06-03, 01:27 PM   #1
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Tim E. Tumurk VS Shrapnel (PROBATION MATCH)

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Check In Due: Wendesday 10-08-03
Verses Due: Friday 10-10-03

Winner Is In The League & Off Probation
Loser Is Out Of The League
 
Old 10-06-03, 01:28 PM   #2
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Thank you.


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Old 10-06-03, 01:42 PM   #3
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checkin in......
 
Old 10-07-03, 06:21 PM   #4
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KEY'D cuz

purple is gay

I may have flipped a few lines
but it was quick cuz i wanted to
get this over with...

People say my career is over...but here is a little clue
if indeed my career is over it would only be over you. . .
i dont have to try in this battle, im suprised your still around
this battle's like arms cut off cuz i got the win... hands down !
A.I. is your only accomplishment?! damn..... this kid's a slacker
heh, watch as i give HaZe a Big L..... like the mainstream rapper !
your verses are BlAh...i told u u're garbage no need to ignore me
y? bother 2 talk about how wack u r, when ur verses.. do it 4 me !
you're outta my league!..i'm better than you..& your also outta luck
imma hang this cat from a flag pole so that every one knows what's up !

BlAh 10 lines match it or whut ever
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Old 10-07-03, 06:25 PM   #5
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hmmm yea....hope ur rdy to get kicked outta the league cuz that shit sucked...

Shrap is known to lick Scrabble Boards in attempts to spit ill wordplay
This kid spits like a bitch..With all that dick in the way!
Givin head in the back of class is the only way your goin down in 'history'
Fear of getting 'kicked'..This Kat's left with more goosebumps than RL Stine mysteries!
Like Kurt Warner, Ima "Ram" ya chest and wear your heart on my sleeve
Shrapnel still in the league? Like opey without ho-hos its hard to believe
Yeah Shrap spits ill... That explains how weekly you get worse...
About to son you worse...than if I let Camarac ghostwrite my verse
Brand the mark of a loser in your forehead,so Shrap can really burn-an-L
Its Killer Instincts,How bout you bitches learn how to spell!
Verbally abuse this bitch... Its rape how I"ll cover all the bases
My punches leave Shraps face more fucked up than typing with alternating cases

iight lets get votes....
 
Old 10-07-03, 06:41 PM   #6
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I'm really trying to find something quotable from shrapnel...
I couldnt....

Vote to sonn....
For better punches, wordplay, personals...

^^^
So shrap understands...
Shrap... you came played as hell...
Only your 4th bar was even useable...
Not like Sonn came great... but came less played and therefore wins...

I liked the Cam line...


Vote: Sonn-In Time

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Old 10-07-03, 06:44 PM   #7
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WHAT!!!!

i quit.
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Old 10-07-03, 06:46 PM   #8
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^^ok then...u made it easier for urself lol....U FUCKING MADE ME WASTE A VERSE...anyways......i win u lose...period...ur outta the league


close this shit...
 
Old 10-07-03, 06:51 PM   #9
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no not literally lol
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Old 10-07-03, 06:58 PM   #10
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^^ur a fucking idiot....stop freeposting in here....damn ur gay

1-0 im winning...uppin
 
Old 10-07-03, 07:19 PM   #11
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Quote:
Originally posted by -ShRAPneL-


People say my career is over...but here is a little clue
if indeed my career is over it would only be over you. . .
Nah.. Wasn't Feelin This Much 5/10

i dont have to try in this battle, im suprised your still around
this battle's like arms cut off cuz i got the win... hands down !
Played, but not bad 7/10

A.I. is your only accomplishment?! damn..... this kid's a slacker
heh, watch as i give HaZe a Big L..... like the mainstream rapper !
Ehh.. 5/10

your verses are BlAh...i told u u're garbage no need to ignore me
y? bother 2 talk about how wack u r, when ur verses.. do it 4 me !
Good Punch.. 7/10

you're outta my league!..i'm better than you..& your also outta
luck
imma hang this cat from a flag pole so that every one knows what's up !
Not A Bad Finisher.. 7/10

Overall - 31/50



<center> ..Next.. </center>

Quote:
Originally posted by Sonn-In Time

Shrap is known to lick Scrabble Boards in attempts to spit ill wordplay
This kid spits like a bitch..With all that dick in the way!
Didn't Flow Well At All .. 5/10

Givin head in the back of class is the only way your goin down in 'history'
Fear of getting 'kicked'..This Kat's left with more goosebumps than RL Stine mysteries!
[B] Not Good.. 5/10


Like Kurt Warner, Ima "Ram" ya chest and wear your heart on my sleeve
Shrapnel still in the league? Like opey without ho-hos its hard to believe
Herd The "ram" Before.. Not Bad Tho.. 6/10

Yeah Shrap spits ill... That explains how weekly you get worse...
About to son you worse...than if I let Camarac ghostwrite my verse
Good Punch.. 7/10

Brand the mark of a loser in your forehead,so Shrap can really burn-an-L
Its Killer Instincts,How bout you bitches learn how to spell!
Good... 7/10

Verbally abuse this bitch... Its rape how I"ll cover all the bases
My punches leave Shraps face more fucked up than typing with alternating cases
This Was Ight.. 6/10

Overall - 35/60





Purple Didn't Match His Lines, But I Guess
I Have A Difference Of Opinon Against CHrit Here..
Dunno.. Just THought Shrap Edged It here..

Vote - Shrap
 
Old 10-07-03, 07:21 PM   #12
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^^wtf....i swear everytime u vote...ur vote never makes since....u say my verse was better but vote for him?....wtf...w/e

1-1...uppin

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Old 10-07-03, 07:25 PM   #13
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actually....both of yall need to be out the league cuz both of
yall need to elevate....seriously......this shouldn't even be a
probation match....more like a....'Evolve is just kidding about u
actually being in the league match'...but.......Shrap came pure
shitty....seriously.....his best punch was..... Blah....10 lines
match it or whatever
......Sonn came less shitty than Shrap...
which isn't saying a whole lot....so....unfortunately i have to vote
so i'll go wit sonn-in-time...


but let me just add this in....i feel as though...after reading both
of ur verses......i gone blind....and now find it difficult to even
summon up the strength to drop a verse in my own battle.
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Old 10-07-03, 07:31 PM   #14
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Shrap

People say my career is over...but here is a little clue
if indeed my career is over it would only be over you. . .
This line was aight...

i dont have to try in this battle, im suprised your still around
this battle's like arms cut off cuz i got the win... hands down !
Played seen it a lot of times

A.I. is your only accomplishment?! damn..... this kid's a slacker
heh, watch as i give HaZe a Big L..... like the mainstream rapper !
Blah...Ugly ass wordplay

your verses are BlAh...i told u u're garbage no need to ignore me
y? bother 2 talk about how wack u r, when ur verses.. do it 4 me !
Ehh...Not good

you're outta my league!..i'm better than you..& your also outta
luck
imma hang this cat from a flag pole so that every one knows what's up !
Didn't like it...Should of had a harder finisher

Overall - A lot of played and filler lines...

Sonn

Shrap is known to lick Scrabble Boards in attempts to spit ill wordplay
This kid spits like a bitch..With all that dick in the way!
Didn't like it...Weak

Givin head in the back of class is the only way your goin down in 'history'
Fear of getting 'kicked'..This Kat's left with more goosebumps than RL Stine mysteries!
I thought this was nice...Coulda been worded better tho...Still aight

Like Kurt Warner, Ima "Ram" ya chest and wear your heart on my sleeve
Shrapnel still in the league? Like opey without ho-hos its hard to believe
Blah...This was on the low side...

Yeah Shrap spits ill... That explains how weekly you get worse...
About to son you worse...than if I let Camarac ghostwrite my verse
I like the second line...Not the 1st

Brand the mark of a loser in your forehead,so Shrap can really burn-an-L
Its Killer Instincts,How bout you bitches learn how to spell!
This was aight...

Verbally abuse this bitch... Its rape how I"ll cover all the bases
My punches leave Shraps face more fucked up than typing with alternating cases
Blah...Didn't think this hit hard...

OverAll
I think Sonn aka Tim E. came with a better verse cuz i didn't really see that many played lines and his punches hit harder than Shraps...It seemed like Shrap didn't wanna win...

Vote = Tim E.
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Old 10-07-03, 07:35 PM   #15
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3-1 Im winning...



uppin for votes....
 
 


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