Lifes a science a full time lab
mistakes an pitiful rituals
no tellin how well life will stab
its all in the morals of the hiddin ritucul

I think we all gotta purpose to reveal our inner self
to let loose or opinion stop holden it up on'a shelf
an inner conflict of split wristes revults to this shit
of a dead body but who da blame but ya guns clip
no tellin, but im yellin im sick'a hearin lies an rumours
sencor out the black male an make life comedy humour
bloopers of misconducts everyday maturmony killerz
suppose everything is for the real hormonious dealerz
i aint fixin shit in life ye all dun fucked up no regrets
the saint just putten ye out like smoked cigrettes
thinkin you got life rapped in yah hand..your selfish man
turns out everything we do is screwed no1 understands
crackoligy on the street as if the materials werent laced
playen god actin like you aint no damn big disgrace
you was put in your place at a tender age of sixteen
you made a habbit of worshipping the obscene
police got us out for warnts wit paper as cuffs
call your self a wigger but ya statements bluff
your acts fucked, my hypothises is..you all mislead
you all good as dead in the casket wit blanket red
for some dumb shit that be runnin through your head


my hypothisis..people think they got something comen...but normally turns out..its just another fasle stament of people searching to get by an hide from the red carpet..so why was drama even started??...wen we all good as dead...

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

yo i was feelin that, the topic was hella original. the wordplay and vocab were both there, and i liked the content. i thought that post was pretty damn good. overall id rate it a 7.5-8/10. good post, keep postin and elevatin man, i enjoyed readin that.

yo can u please return the favor and post a reply?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81167
thanx

peace.....

Yeah this peice was pretty good, i thought it was a good read, you had good vocab, and your wordplay was good as well, you had good flow too i thought, but overall it was good, if you get the chance check out my peice called "Losing Hope" Thanks.

DONT SLEEP ON THISD ISH THIS IS FIRE SON YOU ALWAYS COME THROUGH WITH BLAZNESS STAY UP POP

thanks you 3,,,uppen this

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461