man i spat this keystyle an the cat didnt show up,
i aint even had myfirst battle yet
so i wanna kno how to evolve my style feedback wud be nice



aiight check/
im like eyes an computers, 2 your health im detremental/
u like a rap record with no words u's like an instrumental/
theres no point u bein around u wack, like NOUGHTS in the bank/
an im'a CROSS ready to X ya ass out an thank/
U..../ for battlin me, in a battle wit only one winner/
an it aint gon be you winnin, cos im u a saint an im a sinner /
the good guy usually wins, but this time it aint the case/
u gonna cum out wit ryhmes, thats bout as interestin as dryin paint/ i bet u got no pace, u the turtle im on speed an im the hare/ i dont usually like sleepin, but they can on u i dont care/
an i kno ur parents treats u like shit clothes, in the wardrobe which u dont wear/

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