Tone:
lyrically tendencies~buckin enemys~
throw yo head threw the plated window~
glass stashed into yo forhead~
2 shots~1 nine~1 try~0 times~you dead~
spittin gangsta lines~in my brain~
so even my insides is thug/

LiL LoCo (me):
shit i make niggas bleed for a joke~
pop the trigga make the gat smoke~
'fuck cuz~rep folk~'~hettic static~
as the mic drops~u frantic~
shit im systamatic~
i drop rhymes like numbers~and i aint no mathamatic/
have u chokin~like a asthamatic~
lattitude~spray yo block wit dis~'mac dude'/(DAMN)

Tone:
thugged rhyme since birth~
shit im the sickest MC~since 'Eye Ku' not from earth~
have yo ass tremblin~and u aint doin the shake~
you resemblin~yo boys~they fake~
Fuckin wit Tone u makin a mistake~
i cop gats daily~
drop cats vagliy~
i dont fight fair~ill pop out my knife~slit yo ass from yo toes to yo hair/

LiL LoCo:
bullet proof~u pussy~
shit ill go into war wearin nouthin~
come out scratchless~violence is my pasion~
fuckin wit me~u askin for a death wish~shit im strappin~
50~shit i'd cap the nigga Swift'D(swiftly)~
even if i was 'wearin a target' nigga would still miss me~
u simply~the fakest G~since Ja Rule~claimed to be anotha MaKaVeLLi....

Tone:
DAMNNN

LiL LoCo:
shit was sick man 1

yea i liked that shit alot exspecially the last line i fuckin hate ja rule 4 that shit nobody can ever be as nice as pac

thanks nigga hit dis up dun sleep

Yeah this was a pretty good peice, you had good multies, and your flow was good, try to even the lines out it make it flow better and look better, but overall it was a good read and it was pretty good i thought, keep dropping.