Iight spittin right now, 10-12 lines, post your verse tonight.
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Ayo...

Your career took a dive off the deep end, there's no reason to battle you/
Claming you wear a 'vest', but walk on the shallow end of the 'talent pool'/
X Ecution? ya cords'll be in pain...when I rip you vocally and morally/
Must be a "tooth paste" salesman how you give out so much "oral-b"/
You got the hardware to battle, but forgot the tools for the bench/
Battling me you screwed yourself, I just handed you the L n wrench/
I'll rock you fast to sleep, watch me flow to this bitches heart beat/
Ya rhymes just 'aint kickin' like 'infants in shopping cart seats'/
I'll carve a face in your head and dig your brains out like they were pumpkin seeds/
Call me tha 'Ashton Kutcher of this rap shit' the way i 'punk'd' emcees/
You got a straight record, only becuase you battle non-veteran-hoes/
Truth is you couldn't be on a 'top ten list' if you wrote on tha 'David Letterman Show'/

You gonna drop??? This has been up for awhile, hurry up and drop, i'm tryin to get shit up to date and get a crew need this battle so hit it up.
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o sahyt i forgot bout this i drop now.........sry man....1
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I got the Kiss-of-Death, Cut Knives-on-Chest So Kwick I’ll Slice-ya-Breath/
Mah Punches’ll ‘Clock-ur-Ankles’! Than make u Time-ya-Steps/

Muscles Startin-ta-Flex..Got this ‘Hoe Scared’ like ‘Gardners-Wit-Threats/
Partin-ya Neck, Excuse-ya-Scripts like u had to Pardon-ya-Text/

Unlock-ya-Flames if u keep Fire-in-Puzzles, Leave this Guy-in-a-Muzzle/
Crack-all-ur-Punches like I was the first to Decipher-ya-Knuckles/

keep Tellin’em He Wack But he Missin-the-Clues like an Old Slueth/
Wisdom in a Grown Tooth I’ll Make U PAY! For Crossing-mah-Lines like a Fuckin Toll Booth/

this kid goes Down-on-Pirates the way he Blows Hooks, get Punched wit No Looks/
you not that ILL, u just have D/R to COVER ur Story like when u Fold Books/

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81869

hit this up..............cheers.......

breakdown.......nice battle:-------

punches-x....just
flow-both
origanality-x
sustainment-both
metas-x
multis-x
wordplay-x

overall=x.......jus felt his verse more......

sry man i forgot bout it..................vote time

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Your career took a dive off the deep end, there's no reason to battle you/
Claming you wear a 'vest', but walk on the shallow end of the 'talent pool'/


^ That line is definitly bitten, Im not sure where I remember seeing it but I did see it, Maybe Saladin .. I'll look into and find out until then someone else needs to cheak this out ..

yo dont freepost...but good that u suspect it....

drop a vote too please..........
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Yea go ahead and look, and keep lookin untill your comp shuts down cuz you aint gonna find shit in my verse thats been posted any where else. How is it 1-0 you? Uppin
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Oh never mind lol my bad didnt see that voter, damn i'm fuckin stoned lol, straight verse tho. Uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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nah trust dizzy that shit was tite u serious man u fucked him up if x cution wins then he wins for tlking shit, decent rap dizzy and it was easy to read loads of flow and decent punches, d/w bout it that verse was tite d/w bout that kid he wont find shit,if i could vote i'd voting ite

pz

......................ok hi d/r..........................

pleae polish his penis next time b4 u suck it

damn where r the votes...........

yo i took time to vote on this so return tha favour..........................................ch ek.....................ma link an put an honest vote..............