this is about something that happened to me when i was about 9 years old. it was a very dramatic experience. it was the first time i saw someone bloody and runin for their lives.



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fuzzy wuzzy was a bear, fuzzy wuzzy tried jack herer
fuzzy wuzzy got the munchies,
so he mauled some hikers, into head cheeze

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OMG that must of been petrifying..........
Cuz I just spied some guy, tryin to stumble past my drive
Wit half his facial features, featuring substantial fractures from gunfire
^ thats gross, u actually saw that?

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where have you been!?? did you know you made the crew kid?? you have to stop in and take a look at the tryouts

this was yet again a great piece, you never fail!

it was kinda a scary to actually picture that but to have seen it OMG i would never sleep again.

you put this into a great piece, and got the story out well, held the attention the whole time throu, never a dull moment

even thou it was short that didnt matter coz in that time you got it out and in wasnt blank in spots it felt complet

the structure was the same as all your others, which works for this piece, and the flow worked also

good to see you back here

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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yea, i saw most of it. i saw him duckin bullets, runin up to peeps homes. all after he caught one in the jaw. i was just glad he didnt come up to our house.

it kinda stuck wit me over the years. thats why i thought it might make a interesting piece. just another part of my life, recorded down on paper.

thanks, highlander

^the poem is lyrically crazy but it struck me as more of a rap joint, like some Nasir Jones shit but it was some 05 shit (ahead of its time) maybe if we all catch up u'll get the proper responses from heads many times more intelligent then me, lol , 1luv.

Shit was off the chain!!..nice story and the mood of this had me fiending for more. U kept it interesting wanting every line, shit 2 bad for the nigga, i would of open the door and bust one straight to his head to end his misery, and make sure he was inseide my crib before i shoot him so i just tell the cops he was trying to rob my house.uno